Alt. Ending-TLC/What Happen to Your Hero (.. A little spoiler)

Triz · 11-23-2007, 02:59 AM

Good Intro: As the hero threw the mask in the fire, he realize what he had done. He knew one day Jack O' Blades will re-turn. He wanted to keep that to himself though. He must go to the Hero's Guild.

Bad Intro: He put on the mask. The power was over powering. He knew that he must kill whoever made him angry... He knew were to start. At the Hero's Guild. He got on his dragon and began piloting.

Chapter 1: The way of the neutral
Hero opened the front gate and saw nothing but blood everywhere. What had happen? Pity, thought Hero. The blood was dry. Whoever did it, had to be a least a day ago. There is nothing else to do only to flee. Hero turned and walk past the bragging stage. He had seen a bottle with a note. As the sun beat down Hero's back, he covered his eyes from the shining rays. He thought, this could be a bad day after all. Bad? Good? Whatever the Hero path he took he need to have a good neutral heart as well. As he walked toward the bottle, he notice there was a red crystal in the bottle as well. He open the bottle..... END OF CHAPTER 1

How does everyone like it?

Angel · 11-23-2007, 12:08 PM

A good start - maybe a little more information? Or that could be the prologue before chapter one and you could pad out the first chapter a bit more?

Write some more - I'd like to read it

Triz · 11-23-2007, 03:20 PM

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Originally Posted by Angel

A good start - maybe a little more information? Or that could be the prologue before chapter one and you could pad out the first chapter a bit more?

Write some more - I'd like to read it

Thanks Angle! I'd be sure to write more!

Pommern · 11-23-2007, 10:59 PM

After the Hero as thrown the mask away you can see you get experience + more reknown or something. Does that mean that it is possible to continue playing or does it stop right there? For me its stops when credits are done :S Does that happen to u guys too??

Triz · 11-24-2007, 02:51 AM

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Originally Posted by Pommern

After the Hero as thrown the mask away you can see you get experience + more reknown or something. Does that mean that it is possible to continue playing or does it stop right there? For me its stops when credits are done :S Does that happen to u guys too??

...er.. This is sorta spamming... but everyone gets to play afterward.

Angel · 11-25-2007, 09:51 PM

Not spamming - just in the wrong place - must have thought you were telling people the different endings to the game