[0cean v0id]

So far... The minions and the infamous jack of blades were getting ever closer to albions largest and most populated [about 40 villagers all similair and about 9 children...]. The legendary hero solcious now joined by several generic heros [including ocean the great].
"Tell the guards to take cover we cant have any unnessecary deaths," said solcious in a self assuring voice.
"All right ill leave you to it," said Dawn "but if you need us we will be in bowerstone jail".
Jack was now rushing through the entrance of greatwood. His minions voices could now be heard from bowerstone and the dwellers of lookout point had taken shelter in bowerstone. Solcious went ahead to the middle of lookout point, falling and dropping a silver key, but made it to cut of jack so he would not make it to bowerstone.
Solcious stood facing the entrance to greatwood focusing his mana for the fight....

What will come of the fight between solcious and and jack find out Thursday!

To Be Continued

[rewasandcookie]

nice story man but u write in such big letters and write soo little i want to read some more each time so much suspence its killing me!!

[moonfever]

Great story. Write more please.

[SorenSwift]

Its really good just needs more at a time

[Dentie]

Its a bit small but rlly good

[O'Malley-Bomb]

A bit short but good

[Dr KillJoy]

It was good cant wait to read the rest

[Zquad]

Short but exciting