ok chap 2 is not as long but it gets more into the man in the robe and the story line hope u like it and again post your thoughts about it
As the man lie there on the floor I start to feel the spot in my lag where the arrow in my pocket had stabbed me. I rip of my shirt to tie around the wound but I relies my left arm is bleeding as well. So I rip the shirt in two and tie the wounds up. I then look for the note that Gimus had given me. “Where could it be?” I say to my self. Then it hit me the note was in the same pocket as the arrow. I start to run up the stairs only to find the man standing atop them. I yell, “ Who are you!” the man only speaks the same language as before. I can only make out a 2 words. “Skorms” and “son”. He pulls the arrow out of his chest and throws it on the ground. I then see the color of is blood it was an odd mix of green and black. I pull my sword back out but he said “hck nohc”. I had no idea what he said but I stand my ground. He yells it again “HCK NOHC”. Then I see a man in the corner of my eye. It is my father he yells to me “Son run to Gimus”. The man is the robe jumps from the stairs. My father swings his sword at the man. But the man ducks under the mighty swing if the sword and jumps onto my father. I can her my father screaming as I run to get the not and run away from the horrible beast.
I run to a room in the heroes’ guild it has the armor of all the great heroes in it. I see a stairs case and run up it. There I find Gimus with a hole in his arm completely missing.
He says, “Boy do you have the message?” I said, “Yes I do”. “Then all is not lost we can still stop him”. “Who” I ask, “He is no man he is a god”. “Skorm you mean Skorm is here in Albion!” “Not yet he sent his son Skorn to open the gate”. “His son?” Yes I found a message from one of Skorms followers”. I accidentally through it to you with the sword”.
“It need to get to the…….LOOK OUT” I turn around to see the man with my father’s sword in his hands. He takes out his bow and fires right at me. I fell a force pushing me back I can see every thing fly back as I start to fall out a window.
I start to think about my family my father and mother. I wondered just why this happened to me. I wondered about if I would live or die and if I lived how my life would change.
All of this was running thought my head as I hit the water. Even as I was sinking to the bottom I was just “wondering”. Then I get to my senses. I started to swim but the arrow in my shoulder was stuck. I try to pull it out but I cant. The pain was terrible I couldn’t take it. I pulled out a knife my father had given me earlier that day and started to carve it out of my shoulder blood was floating in the water as I finally get the arrow out. I couldn’t feel my arm but I started to swim up to the surface. Once at the surface I looked up at the tower I had fallen out of. I the heard a voice says “Catch”. An object fell from the window I fell out of. I catch it. I was a lamp. Then I heard “swim to the waterfall”.
I looked around and see the waterfall I start to swim. Then a splash behind me. I wonder what it was but I couldn’t stop to turn around. Then a arrow is shot at me but it narrowly misses me. I get to land and run to the waterfall. I see a door with a face on it I looked it in amazement. Then the door talked to me. “Only the lighten path can open me” I start to think a realize the lamp! I quickly light the lamp. The door said “Goon now run inside I will unlock myself when it’s all over”. I run in side the door to see a lake and a library. I go rip a page out of a book and get it wet. Then I start to mend my wound. I then lie half of me in the lake and start to cry myself to sleep……..
CHAPTER TWO END
