nothing to do with gaming but read it please

funky_fable · 12-22-2006, 06:32 AM

what is about to befall your eyes is my own short story so read well weary readers or thou shalt feel the rath of the shadow riders so read but at your own risk.
'For what is it that the very ground does tremble beneath angry thunderous hooves. For what purpose is it that the sky grows sickly black as from the wasted corpses burning. Is it for evil is in flight and for you this night is stalking, can you see as the shadow from the sun is faded from the cities to the cries of anguished mothers. Can you see them riding hard as the wind howls to hail their approaching. For the world behind them is consumed from rotting in a nightmarish eclipse of war, pestilence, famine and death. Sent forth to destroy the world as the night consumes the light. Hell bent in the ashes of the world so be it that we shall rightly fear the shadow riders that are coming. These pure evil ghosts, the very four who have been unleashed and dammed that they shall bring to us the bitter end of our days and for what their own sick enjoyment i dont think so we have been accured by our so called gods for what we do in life and what do we get in return, an eternity of pain and suffering, for this is what hapens when we disobey our gods.

FableFreak · 12-22-2006, 06:57 AM

I have a feeling you just copied and pasted that on here....

DrZoid · 12-22-2006, 07:06 AM

nothing to do with anything at all apparently. =\
& ye.
I agree with fablefreak here..
(rarely happens tbh)

funky_fable · 12-22-2006, 07:06 AM

dude i dont do that. Besides what did you think of it

DrZoid · 12-22-2006, 07:07 AM

I thinks its the most random thing ive ever heard.

& it sounds like it should be in the middle of some sort of book.

funky_fable · 12-22-2006, 07:15 AM

no couse i dont cheat on things like this. i just use my creativity, and dont damper on other peoples succesions will ya that would be appreciated

DrZoid · 12-22-2006, 07:19 AM

ok..

so were you expecting everyone to be apllauding your 'amazing' writing talents?

Maybe if you introduced it or something. eg: "I wrote this on a rainy afternoon whilst in a particular dark mood. Let me know what you think...."

I dunno. It just seemed really random.

funky_fable · 12-22-2006, 07:30 AM

well maybe i should alright then it is done edited and refineshed and no not all but those who like short storys at least

FableFreak · 12-22-2006, 07:40 AM

Lets not get too whingy on him here. It was good writing, very creative, but I need some sort of proof that its your original work.

funky_fable · 12-22-2006, 07:43 AM

yea how am i gonna do that

Angel · 12-22-2006, 12:13 PM

Well, as it is creative writing I'm gonna move this thread to Barrow Fields and hopefully we'll get to read some more...

*Thread moved

§ephiroxa§ · 12-22-2006, 02:57 PM

So you can take time, and edit all your mistakes in a giant paragraph, but when you're posting you can't take two seconds to correct mispelled words? Iunno,..It's cool. nice writing I suppose...

Vegeta · 12-22-2006, 08:58 PM

Who gives a **** if it was copied and pasted anyway gawd..........

I beleive you I think you wrote it. i dont need any proof.

§ephiroxa§ · 12-22-2006, 09:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 1Ak

Who gives a **** if it was copied and pasted anyway gawd..........
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because that my friend is called plagerism and is frowned upon in most societies.

Vegeta · 12-22-2006, 09:26 PM

Not mine.