The King Of War

Mr_Smile · 04-23-2007, 06:07 AM

Chapter 1

One Time It Whas a boy who had a normal life in bowerstone he played with other childrens. One day camed a hero called Thunder. And teached him about life as a hero. Now the boy wanted to follow that man on hes adventure. Thunder said yes they goed around in witchwood and greatwood they whas a good team but one time Thunder whas killed my a hobbe the boy hadent finished hes training.So he couldnt kill 3 hobbes so he fleed to heros guild and trained on hes Skill on shooting whit the bow and when he tryed hes will skills he blowed the dummy then he trained hes meele he won over hes friend and now the final test he need to win over a man called Ziahs. He where good on will but not on fighting the boy won over Ziahs. Ziahs whas mad and attacked the boy rolled under him and shooted lighning in the back. Ziahs runned and the boys training whas a succes

Grim Reefa · 04-23-2007, 10:39 AM

haha that was soo bad, +rep

Tsuyu · 04-23-2007, 10:42 AM

Uhm so... yeah. Is that spelling so bad on purpose... ?

souledge37 · 04-23-2007, 03:36 PM

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Originally Posted by Tsuyu

Uhm so... yeah. Is that spelling so bad on purpose... ?

yeah. im Usually good at reading bad spelling but this is really bad

TRA Rotid · 04-23-2007, 06:47 PM

Come on, it`s not that bad.

Mr_Smile · 04-23-2007, 07:15 PM

thanks for comment but in real im just a swedish boy who is 10 year Hahaha

Tsuyu · 04-23-2007, 07:18 PM

Swedish eh? Well so am I, so let me give you some pointers: It isn't "dident" or "isent". It is "did not" or "didn't" aswell as "is not" and "isn't". The "e" is never typed, only heard.

souledge37 · 04-24-2007, 03:22 PM

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Originally Posted by Tsuyu

Swedish eh? Well so am I, so let me give you some pointers: It isn't "dident" or "isent". It is "did not" or "didn't" aswell as "is not" and "isn't". The "e" is never typed, only heard.

so your swidish with a japanese name and hentai

TRA Rotid · 04-24-2007, 04:35 PM

If hentai was made only for japanese people... that`d be discrimination.

droded · 04-24-2007, 09:51 PM

Well done, a valiant effort. +Rep

Tsuyu · 04-24-2007, 09:53 PM

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Originally Posted by souledge37

so your swidish with a japanese name and hentai

Pretty much yeah. What's your point?

droded · 04-24-2007, 09:57 PM

Relax he probably didn't know is all.