[SorenSwift]

Originally Posted by Dark Drakan

Soren try if you dare
but all you will achieve is a gruesome scare
ending with fishing your body out of the lake
after being battered to death with my rake!

While Drakan sings his crappy song.
I sneak up behind his giant fat head.
And set loose upon him the mighty King Kong.
After this poem Drakan might close the thread.
But thats alright cause i've got his head!
Apprenticeship of arckon is mine
Autographs I shalll soon sign.

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[blu phoenix]

Originally Posted by SorenSwift

While Drakan sings his crappy song.
I sneak up behind his giant fat head.
And set loose upon him the mighty King Kong.
After this poem Drakan might close the thread.
But thats alright cause i've got his head!
Apprenticeship of arckon is mine
Autographs I will soon sign.

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nice poem there soren!

[SorenSwift]

Thank you blu pheonix
For complimenting my poem
It was try number 6
I might write a tome.

[blu phoenix]

Originally Posted by SorenSwift

Thank you blu pheonix
For complimenting my poem
It was try number 366
I will have it written in a tome.

wow! some great poems here soren

and i know i am not rhyming....

[SorenSwift]

Rhymings not that hard.
Embrace your inner bard.
You can do it blu.
To yourself just be true.

[blu phoenix]

i am not really a good bard
my poems are like lard
but hell i give it a try
and then say bye-bye
to blu the lamest poet on earth!!

[SorenSwift]

Incredible, Hidden talent revealed!
Blue phoenix your fate has been sealed.
You must become a great poet.
That was a great poem and you know it.

[DrZoid]

Yeah sure why not,
We secretly know that poem was rot.

Kinda like this one,
So i'll stop writing now,
I can't rhyme this line,
So this poem won't shine.


Well that was probably the worst poem I've ever atemtped to write lol.

[Arckon]

I have chosen.

One who ryhmes so well
Such as the Dr.
Cannot be my apprentice
So down you go to hell.

Soren you have much talent in you
But you do not ryhme with you heart.
You ryhme with your brain.
And If you ask me your brain is rather tart.

Draken you ryhme well
but ummmmm no
go back to Bevivel

Blu you need to be my apprentice the most
no offence but some of your poems are crunchy,
sorta like toast.

To be my apprentice I choose.... blu
because I find all of her poems true.
True from her heart not her head.
Blu Phoenix you can choose to follow the path up ahead.

If she chooses no,
I will take no apprentice for another day
So Blu Phoenix what do you say?

[blu phoenix]

you all are bards
because your poems are not lard
but my fate has been sealed
like soren once revealed.

[SorenSwift]

AHhh dude i made king kong beat up drakan for nothing !? Ah oh well your apprencticeship sounds boring anyway I read the thread about you trying to teach blu and Skorms Son total bore fest.

P.S. I needed like 1,000 bananas to get kingkong on my side.

[Arckon]

You have given king kong bannanas, He will expect more, he is going to kill you soren

[SorenSwift]

Thats to bad because i got king kongs head too.

[blu phoenix]

Originally Posted by Arckon

You have given king kong bannanas, He will expect more, he is going to kill you soren

ha! you didn't rhyme...beat you !!! i win!!!

[SorenSwift]

I wasnt trying to rhyme you already won jesus