[Zjuggernaut]

Originally Posted by White Knight

Yeah make a fan fic about Hal's(Master Chief) adventures in albion.

Thats a Machinima series on Youtube called "Hals Odyssey"

[The_Priestman]

I like the story, very nice

But one thing kind of made me sad. It's that you altered Arken's history. This is a fanfic and i respect that, I've written a few myself. I'm just saying Arken's story about getting revenge on each and every soldier that betrayed his squad(?) was just too epic to change

Again, I like your story, just throwing my opinion out there

[Dentie]

good story for you

[Hal]

Originally Posted by The_Priestman

I like the story, very nice

But one thing kind of made me sad. It's that you altered Arken's history. This is a fanfic and i respect that, I've written a few myself. I'm just saying Arken's story about getting revenge on each and every soldier that betrayed his squad(?) was just too epic to change

Again, I like your story, just throwing my opinion out there

Ok most of the Archons soldiers were killed at the battle. Arken killed the remaining soldiers except the main character and nostro. When Mortimer took over records of both of them were erased, Nostro is only known becuase he founded the heroes guild. So seeing as nostro and the main character never existed historians assumed Arken killed all the remaining soldiers.

[Sabian171]

good story man.

[Hal]

OK I am writing a sequel right now.