Bard Arena V.2

[Arckon]

First of all new isn't always better
You need to learn to rhyme to the letter
second use this format it is easier to follow
but you will now wallow
in the glory that I will have
you will have your head cracked by my stave
now take in the time to learn
and before I adjurn
I will sting you with my rhyme
You have commited a crime
a crime against me
now kneel and kiss my feet
fr it is time to meet
your maker, or your master, and king
now you will fall and feel my sting
you have been stabbed and blood covers your face
you can't run the race
the pace is to fast
you just won't last.

[FableFreak]

Crow, that last rhyme was pitiful
Horse crap at best
Your wimp *** glock
Can't punch through my bullet proof vest

I'm the man with a closet full of guns
Don't try and rob me or your life will be done
I've got 9mms, 12 guages, and a Tec-9 or two
Try and **** with me and I will **** you up too

[Rhadiel]

I once was here but now I'm gone
I left my name to carry on
those who knew me, knew me well,
those who didn't can go to hell

[FableFreak]

Rhadiel, that was, interesting
But had nothing to do with the Bard Battle
Your poetic devices sound like mindless rabble

Please good people
Continue this fight
Otherwise there shall be none left to bite

[Arckon]

I will continue you this war
now let me give you the tour
this is me beating down crow,
and freak getting the scraps
and this is freak taking this blow
listen to the music it sounds like the Taps
This war is not won
not yet, oh your battle is priority one

[FableFreak]

Arckon, you sound a little tired
All this rhyming got you down?
Maybe drinking some Red Bull will get you wired
Just don't end up looking like a clown

This has been lackluster
Boring at best
Where is all the action?
Or is everyone just having a rest?

[Arckon]

Are you saying, your not having fun
If not my battle is won
and yes I am tired
and a red bull would get me wired
But if your board go and find the nightfox
Or in his words, the nox

But I think you just can't handle
the fact that I am putting you out like a candle
Freak you are looking a little green
Are you sick, I guessing on whats seen

[FableFreak]

I knew you would talk **** and walk tall
But let me assure you I am not about to bawl
I'm ship shape and doing well
And if you think I'm about to give in, then you can go to hell

Arckon, you are in a constant state of conceit
Always thinking I am beat
You go too far saying you have won
And yes, I am having fun

[Arckon]

Its good to have a competirtor
But your going down, for I am a preditor
I will not give in
I will fight all the way to the win

Yes you are doing well
I am sorry but I live in hell
(you forget I live in maine)

[FableFreak]

I never forget you live in Maine
Its a place that is boring and very plain

Now Arckon, your spelling is atrocious
Try reading a dictionary
Or maybe have better focus
Did you go to elementary school? Well, on the contrary...

[Arckon]

Pokes at my education
I can't spell big words, so what
When I write my rhymes I get a sweet sensation
so let me bend over and you kiss my but

And how dare you disrespect me like that
all I have done is sat
back and wrote, Now I shall get knighted
and you will be smited

Unless you grvel before me
And what your future holds, we shall see.

[FableFreak]

I see I have successfully provoked you
Now this will be fun
Show me your education is true
And we will make peace when the battle is won

[Arckon]

Won by who
I don't know
but my education tells me
it won't be you
now go find a nice spot and dig your grave
Then fall to your knee
kiss my feet, if not you are brave

Now the time has come
I am pulling out my education, for some
for some to see, for you to cry
Now leave me in peace, Now I say Aye
Hath thou not muddied my name
Thou wilt pay all the same

I take my education seriously
but my concept of reality
forget about it
and upon thy throne I shall sit
and thee will be kissing my feet
for soon I will be one of the elite

And with this line i did not sell
just go to hell
I will have fun with you in maine
after all, unlike the religous hell, its kinda plain

[blue crow]

The game is over you have win this is fin for blue crow.

[Arckon]

Thats one gone
and one remains, so Freak get off my lawn

I have enjoyed your bout crow
but it is over for you
I can't believe this is true
It seems crow has taken the final blow

(crow is out he can not compete until the battle is won)
Rule Edit:Btw I am sorry I forgot to throw this in
If this battle isn't over for ten pages, the people decides who wins

(oh and crow you may compete, since I forgot to throw that in)