The Battle of the Clans (Not a fable story)

[Vegeta]

The Battle of the Clans

It was a normal day for Sivu… Sivu is a guard for a secret organization of Wizards. Everyday for 100 years now he has guarded this place. Wizards can live to be 5000 years old and Sivu is only 456 now. Sivu stood outside of the door making sure no one got in without the masters permission.

Until one day… It all changed…

A shorter man with 2 daggers in side-pockets and wearing a black hooded robe walked up to the door where I was standing and said

“I need to go in.”

“What is your purpose here?”

“I am here to speak with the owner of this place.”

“I will check if he wants to see you. What’s your name?”

“Tell him Sorgath wishes to speak with him.”

“Alright.”

I ask the master and he says,

“What!?”

“Sorgath wishes to speak with you sir…”

“Oh my god… Kill him now!!!”

“Yes sir.”

I go back out but he is not there… I look all around then when I turn around he jumps down and holds his blade to my throat and covers my mouth.

“Now take me to your master or I will kill you.”

“Ha!”

I kick him in the stomach pushing him back away from me. I draw my ancient staff with a blade on the bottom of it and prepared to fight.

“You shouldn’t have done that.” said the assassin.

I swung and he blocked and then he jumped behind me I blocked right before he would have slashed me in the back of the head. I spun around swinging with the blade at him.

“You have a lot to learn.” said the assassin.

“SHUT UP!!!”

I swung fiercely knocking both blades out of his hands. I start to swing at him when,

“Wait!” said the assassin.

“Make it quick!” I replied.

“Do you even know what you are guarding!?”

“Yes! My master of course!”

“Does he tell you anything of what he does in there?”

“Well… No not really all he says is that it is a top secret project so don’t let anyone in here.”

“Now I see the reason why you’re here… I thought I saw good in you I didn’t understand why you would be doing this…”

“Explain yourself!”

“I was sent by the Paladin assassin group to take out your

“Master” because he is making a… well…”

“Spit it out I don’t have all day!”

“He is making a super demon…”

“…You don’t actually think I would believe that do you?”

“I’m being serious! He is making a Demon that will be strong enough to destroy all the clans and kingdoms… so he can rule the world…”

“How can I believe you?”

“Well why don’t you go see for yourself?”

I put the assassin in handcuffs and act as if I’m bringing him down to the dungeon. The master asked no questions. When we got down to the last floor the assassin said,

“I can feel it now…”

“What?”

“The demon… he is getting stronger by the minute…”

“Where is it?”

“I think it might be held in an underground chamber… do you know of one here?”

“The master tells me nothing…”

We look around until we finally get to a passage covered in dirt,

“Here it is.” said the assassin.

I open the door and walk into what felt as if it were an oven… I covered my face and walked down there was a huge gate at the end of the room and inside it was the most horrifying thing I have ever seen in my entire life.

[FableFreak]

Interesting and quitwe good, but maybe not so much empty space in between the dialogue. Your story almost takes up a whole page!

[souledge37]

pretty good

[Albion Knight]

Hey nice job!! Maybe change the name super demon to something less generic sounding that you could explain later like a Demon of KarGK

[Vegeta]

Chapter 2.

It was huge... about 16 to 20 feet tall. It had spikes all the way down its' back and onto its tail... The teeth were so sharp they looked like they could bite right through metal with no problem.

I stared at it... I couldn't move I was paralyzed with fear... Sorgath must have known I was so he said,

"It... It isn't that big..."

I didn't answer back it was horrifying I wanted to crawl back into my mothers womb at that point...

"We... We have to kill it before it reaches full power if we don't... well lets just hope we do." said Sorgath.

"Yeah... we better do that."

We walked over to the gate and tried to open it,

"Damn" I said.

"What?"

"Its locked..."

We tried opening it with everything we had but it was impossible to break the lock... by the time we figured out there was no way wewere going to open it we heard someone speak.

"Get away from there!" said the owner.

"Were to late he's here!" said Sorgath

I was tired from doing everything in my power to open the gate and when I saw the owner with a bunch of guards to his side I was sick... Sick with fear, Sick that I wasn't going to make it out of here alive, sick of the fact that I didn't just stay with my master and killed Sorgath...

We fought for as long as we could killing guards defending are selves. All while the demon was getting stronger and learning are fighting tactics.

"We need to get outta here!" I said

"Whenever theres an opening we have to get out of here before it's to late."

We fought a few more guards and ran out of the building dashing through the forest... we had to get away we were injured and tired...

All was going well until.... Bump....Bump....Bump....

"What the hell is that?!?" I asked

"It... it's the Demon... it is at full power... we have failed... I have failed..."

"Don't worry... Everything has a weakness we will find it... sometime..."

But little did we know... It wasn't over yet...

We ran quickly dashing between narrow trees and pushing off rocks until something fell right in front of us and stopped us in our tracks...

"Hahahahaha..." laughed the scary man standing in front of us.

He had red hair and red eyes he wore a red type of cloak.

"Who are you?!" I yelled.

"I am the person who is going to kill you may call me Tranz"

"Bring it on!" I yelled.

"no." said Sorgath very lightly.

"What?" I asked.

"You can't beat him... I can't beat him... he is the demon."

"WHAT!? He was 20 feet back there!!!"

"This type of a demon can change... to fool you... this is the strongest, fastest, and smartest demon of all... we are doomed..."

"Yes... yes you are... you can't run from me I will catch you... you can't hide from me... I would find you... I will even give you 1 day to run, hide, prepare, say good bye to your family whatever you want. Because no matter what you do I will get you... and kill you. I will be the ruler of the world... all the clans and kingdoms will beg for mercy..."

We took the offer and fled... we knew this wouldn't be the last time we saw him... We had to do something... we had to save the world.

[Albion Knight]

Cool Story Maybe a little more work on the dialog

[Ninja Mage]

Sweet story!!! +rep

[Vegeta]

Thanks =)

[Dark Drakan]

As he is no longer here Thread Closed.