The Complexities of Arckon

Arckon · 04-18-2007, 04:20 AM

poem #4

I got notin

Fooled you

I sit here and type away
I type nonstop day after day
then I realizee I have a life to live
and a gift to give
I have the gift given to a bard
for me poetry was never to hard
than I learned of a feeling I have not felt
a feeling that makes ones heart melt
a feeling of love and joy
a feeling not felt by any ordinary boy
Then that feeling is taken from me when summer ends
and I get a new feeling, the feeling I have friends.

Darg · 04-18-2007, 04:24 AM

HOLY CRAP- THIS GUY CAN WRITE! That was incredible! Trust me, it's not sucking up, it's just that you are quite impressive, beyond impressive my friend!

Arckon · 04-18-2007, 04:28 AM

Your all to kind I am not a pro, to be a pro I have to have a book published, but I have been published in a book and on CD, I guess thats an accomplishment

Darg · 04-18-2007, 04:36 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Arckon

Your all to kind I am not a pro, to be a pro I have to have a book published, but I have been published in a book and on CD, I guess thats an accomplishment

An accomplishment indeed! I'd say that you are a pro in your own way, a way that is your own style. That's the thing with writing: you have to find your own style or you end up as just another brick in the wall...

Arckon · 04-18-2007, 04:44 AM

Darg, you have a toungue like silver
very cunning and witty
You are the night fox very well educated
but I would like you to know my reading level is 12th grade and I am 15.
My reading level me be higher than most adults, but you are still much more witty
and I am humbled, you think my poetry Magnificient. I thank you
I hope i didn't sound, like I was bragging.

Arckon · 04-23-2007, 02:08 AM

poem #5

My alighnment has from hero
to villan, but I still kill zero after zero
My heart has done some time in the Prison of Bargate
And My heart is like the prisons wardon
Seeking out its fate
Some say my heart needs to harden,
I say my heart must stay with the one I seek
For now my heart feels like a bird without its beak
I try and try
But my heart cannot fly
Without her I am nothing, like one of a hive of bees
And right now I am on my knees,
praying for her to come back to me
But she is as free,
as you, I
And for her I would willingly die
But this is fates doing not mine
Dice are thrown and I hope she comes to the state of the pine

blue crow · 04-23-2007, 02:15 AM

Wow you must really like her. Maybe you go and find her and tell her how you fell about her. Or you can send her a email.

Arckon · 04-23-2007, 02:19 AM

I wish it were that simple for one she lives in arizona, and for two she has checked her email in about 7 mounths

blue crow · 04-23-2007, 02:26 AM

Reply to person above you to see my answer.

Arckon · 04-23-2007, 02:33 AM

Thnx I didn't plan on giving up on her anyway

blue crow · 04-23-2007, 02:34 AM

Good you should never give up on some one. Maybe i should heed my on advice.

Arckon · 04-23-2007, 02:36 AM

You should, If its worth heeding, that heed it.

blue crow · 04-23-2007, 02:38 AM

Damit i wish i was numb so i wouldent fell pain. Cause of a girl that i like and has a lot in common already has a boy freind which hurts me every time i look upon the face of an angel.

Arckon · 04-23-2007, 02:46 AM

Be patient for if you force a break up
Your love will not be returned
And you will feel more pain than you do now
and you ask me how
I know this, I have faced the second worst thing
a heart can go through
Upon the face of a former girlfriend lips meeting
They were not my lips though, and it was one of my best friends too
Face red my heart burned
and yet it still beats
no matter the different heats
Cold and dying, young and hot
my heart has died not

blue crow · 04-23-2007, 02:48 AM

Thats deep man and your poetry is top rank in my books.