The Complexities of Arckon

[Arckon]

My poetry is good you and others say,
but I am supposed to say its not that great,
but I think its good aswell
I think its pretty good for a person whos gone through hell
Wondering if his love is not returned,
Or worse his true love is lost

[blue crow]

But remeber one thing easy come easy go. Remeber there are more fishes in the sea. But heed this keep you eyes close cause your eyes can lead to lies.

[Arckon]

poem #4

Aye there be many fish in the sea
But there is only one fish for me
as I see it there is no other choice
and I sing with my own voice
not that of which people tell me
But there is but one girl for me
and she is there in the vast sea

[Darg]

Originally Posted by Arckon

poem #4

Aye there be many fish in the sea
But there is only one fish for me
as I see it there is no other choice
and I sing with my own voice
not that of which people tell me
But there is but one girl for me
and she is there in the vast sea

Interesting poem. It has a message, though I can't really say what. +rep though and keep on writing.

[Arckon]

It means when it comes to true love, you have to think for yourself and never ever givup hope

[Arckon]

poem #5

On an ocean a boat bobs up and down
and on that boat, the sea does frown.
It will most likly sink
But not I think.
The boat might make it to port
Or even to a coastal fort.
Never once did that boat ever spring a leak
Even when it's future seemed meak.
The captin kept on going on through the storm of rain and wave
But the boat never once gave
It kept a steady coarse traveling with the eye
And from the crows nest "land I do spy"
and it seems I am right, a portthey did find
But I have one mor secret, this boat is my mind.

[§ephiroxa§]

Does it mean to never give up?
IT's great though.

[Arckon]

yes thats what it means
and yes i thought it was pretty good.

[Darg]

Originally Posted by Arckon

poem #5

On an ocean a boat bobs up and down
and on that boat, the sea does frown.
It will most likly sink
But not I think.
The boat might make it to port
Or even to a coastal fort.
Never once did that boat ever spring a leak
Even when it's future seemed meak.
The captin kept on going on through the storm of rain and wave
But the boat never once gave
It kept a steady coarse traveling with the eye
And from the crows nest "land I do spy"
and it seems I am right, a portthey did find
But I have one mor secret, this boat is my mind.

Hey, I can rhyme and put into some sense of order with meaning in it, but you sir are a true poet! I love it! +rep for that amazing piece. I can't wait to hear more.

[Arckon]

Thank you
Poem#6

I am sent into a world dreams
where nothing is what it truely seems
I am falling into the abyse below
and a voice awakens me and it's my phoenix, I know
I stop falling, and I stand still, motionless
Blue flame around me, and I am shivering with eagerness.
but I awaken, into what seems to be my life
but what do I find in my chest a knife
There is a knife in m heart
and I realize me and my love can never be apart
I awaken once more, only to fall back with eyelids heavy
Know I know not everyone understands me.

[Arckon]

poem #7
Can I keep it going
Can I keep from knowing
Can I live without wind of this
Can I keep this up, for the one I miss

This I don't know
This I can't show
This I can do
I can just keep waiting for you

Am I ready to give up, no
Am I ready for the towel to throw
once again no

You run father away
but the truth is "Nothing gold can stay" (<Robert Frost)
I come closer but you run
Are you doing this to hurt me or are you having fun

Why must this continue, the endless wait
I guess patience isn't my best trait
Why must this happen, why must you keep me away from you
why must this happen, Fates aim must be true

[blu phoenix]

Oh my...Hi. I know it's been a long time and I have missed you, all of you. Still gifted at poetry. I'm so sorry to say and I don't think you'll(or anyone) will ever forgive me, but so much has happened to me and it's hard for me...

If you're still on...then hi and again beautiful poems.

[Arckon]

It is hard to stay mad at some one I have been expecting for a long time now.

[blu phoenix]

Hey, still I do feel bad and so much has changed around here.

[Arckon]

Aye much has changed
Even I have felt the tight knot of school
School is extremely cruel
especialy on the mind
for harder work than school is extremelyhard to find