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The epic tale of the Guildmaster
Old 05-27-2008, 01:21 AM   #1
PiNo RoKr
Niko Bellic
The epic tale of the Guildmaster

Well, I have been making a story about the guildmaster for awhile now and i think that this would be the place to post it up. so enjoy the first part


ACT I, Part 1:

"Wake up Weaver, it's time to get up You slugabed! Maze is outside looking for you, he says he has to talk to you and it's important."

Mabel said as she shook Weaver out of his sleep.

"Mother, ask him what is so important that it needs my attention this early in the morning."
He said as he sat up, rubbing his eyes.

"Why don't you just go and ask him yourself?"
Mabel Shouted as she got up and walked out of his room.

He got up out of his bed and slowly walked to the brown wooden door. Maze banged on the door and the sound shook awake Weaver's sister from her deep slumber. Weaver opened the door and saw Maze holding something in his hands.

"Hey Maze, next time you wake me up again like that I will have to tell my best friend Ben to beat you up again!"
Weaver's sister, Julia, Shouted angrily from her bed.

"Nice to see you too, Julia!" Maze happily cheered, "Weaver, I have to show you something", Maze nodded toward what was concealed in his hands, "Follow me."

The two walked outside and went into the woods where they thought nobody would find them. Maze turned suddenly and grabbed Weaver, pulling him into the bushes.

"Shut up and stay low!"
Maze whispered as he covered Weaver's mouth with his hand.

The two peered through the bushes and saw two scruffy looking men walking with swords drawn. They meet each other right in front of the bush and started to talk. The talking turned into yelling and the man with the long hair pointed his broadsword at the other man's neck.

"You say one more word Balthazar and I will cut your throat right here right now."

"Please Lawrence, you know not what you do! snap out of it!"

"YOU SHUT YOUR MOUTH YOU TWO FACED TRAITOR!"

"A traitor I may be, BUT I AM NOT TWO FACED! IF YOU WANT A FIGHT THEN WE SHALL FIGHT!"

Lawrence and Balthazar fight as the frightened boys watch from within the bushes. The loud clash of swords stops as Balthazar falls to his knees and begs for his life. Blood flows from his chest and splatters on the ground, getting Lawrence's boots red.

"You see the things that you make me do, Balthazar? Now you know what happens when you betray me. May Skorm take your soul with him and devour it like a feast. Ugh, you make me sick you pathetic little insect."

"Lawrence...I...Never wanted...to harm you in...any way, shape, or...Fo..rm."

Lawrence turns his head away from Balthazar as he falls face first on the floor. Balthazar sees the two boys before dying and whispers,

"Run...Leave...Get out of here before anything worse happens...Uhg...he is a bad man... he...he..."

Balthazar's eyes glaze over and he speaks no more. Weaver and Maze run faster then they have ever run before. They don't care where they end up, just as long as they get as far away from Lawrence as the can.

That's the end of Act I, part 1.
I will have all of the story up on here soon.
But sadly it will have to be Part by part so it will have to take awhile

Thank you for reading

Last edited by PiNo RoKr; 05-27-2008 at 07:39 PM. Reason: Looked like Finishing touches
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Old 05-28-2008, 08:42 AM   #2
sijli
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thank me for reading
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Old 05-28-2008, 08:07 PM   #3
PiNo RoKr
Niko Bellic
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OK dude, this isn't person above you so stop doin that
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Old 05-31-2008, 06:15 AM   #4
Jimbo1425
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Re: The epic tale of the Guildmaster

friar laurence and balthasar romeo's friend?

i like it, when do you think you will posting more
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Old 06-26-2008, 05:38 AM   #5
SorenSwift
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pretty cool dude hope to see more from you
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Old 06-26-2008, 10:02 AM   #6
droded
I am Awesome

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This was very good. Bravo. +Rep.
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Old 06-27-2008, 08:00 AM   #7
Chicken Kicker
Jack of Sporks
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Originally Posted by Jimbo1425 View Post
friar laurence and balthasar romeo's friend?

i like it, when do you think you will posting more
haha i recognized that too. we just finished reading tht story @ school lol but great story!!
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Old 06-27-2008, 08:04 AM   #8
Im Iron
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shouldnt maze have pwned him with lightning???
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Old 06-27-2008, 08:19 AM   #9
Chicken Kicker
Jack of Sporks
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shouldnt maze have pwned him with lightning???
Maze is still a young child you must remember. or @ least tht is what i got of the story so far.
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Old 06-27-2008, 01:52 PM   #10
Dezariane
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it was...badass!
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Old 06-27-2008, 06:54 PM   #11
InnerMass
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Great read, can't wait for the next installment.
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Old 06-28-2008, 09:05 PM   #12
Zquad
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Good writing right there! +rep
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Old 07-04-2008, 10:06 PM   #13
PiNo RoKr
Niko Bellic
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Thank you very much.
Next one will be on very soon.

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Old 07-06-2008, 10:05 PM   #14
Jimbo1425
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pino rokr is that video real because thats just cruel
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Old 07-20-2008, 11:40 AM   #15
Zquad
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When do you plan to release the next part?
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