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Originally Posted by Forum-Troll
WHAT A LOAD OF FUCKING RUBBISH!!
This story is cleverless. How the hell could a little kid even lift up an iron sword? how the living hell could it possible fire an arrow that could kill someone? and how the hell would it possibly be able to fire the arrow after FALLING OFF THE FRIGEN BALCONY TO THE MAP TABLE? he is either unconcious, in a hell of a lot of pain, or with broken bones at this point.
sorry but your story sucks ass. and it gets a downvote of 1.
and I get +25 evil points
+25 
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Dude! You need to get a chill pill! The story is awsome! And I will answer all your questions:
1. He is 13. I'm twelve and I can hit three bullseyes in 5 seconds!
2. Heros, as said in Fable 2, can survive great falls much more then mortals can.
3. It's not evil to say someones story sucks, its just rude, and plain idiotic, especially if its doesn't suck.
Oh, and great story dude keep up the good work.