A Fable story told by me

[Tsuyu]

Nevermind what the idiot(Forum-Troll) is saying, your story is awsome.

[Darkside Hazuki]

I don't know how much of a pansy YOU were when you were a kid, troll, but lifting an iron sword is not like trying to benchpress a rhinoceras.

[Skorm's Son]

Originally Posted by Forum-Troll

WHAT A LOAD OF FUCKING RUBBISH!!

This story is cleverless. How the hell could a little kid even lift up an iron sword? how the living hell could it possible fire an arrow that could kill someone? and how the hell would it possibly be able to fire the arrow after FALLING OFF THE FRIGEN BALCONY TO THE MAP TABLE? he is either unconcious, in a hell of a lot of pain, or with broken bones at this point.

sorry but your story sucks ass. and it gets a downvote of 1.
and I get +25 evil points

+25

I don't see you coming up with anything better you dickhole!!!!
I thought it was a good story...

[Forum-Troll]

Originally Posted by Darkside Hazuki

I don't know how much of a pansy YOU were when you were a kid, but lifting an iron sword is not like trying to benchpress a rhinoceras.

its moreover the part of actually being able to SWING IT at that age. Iron is heavier than steel ya know. Its one of the heaviest metals

[Forum-Troll]

and still you idiots never answered the bow and arrow comment. you know how hard it is to get to fire a bow to a lethal point? so how is it being not only a kid, but INJURED FROM FALLING ABOUT 15 FEET, how can you fire a bow that could kill something?

[Tsuyu]

Originally Posted by Forum-Troll

and still you idiots never answered the bow and arrow comment. you know how hard it is to get to fire a bow to a lethal point? so how is it being not only a kid, but INJURED FROM FALLING ABOUT 15 FEET, how can you fire a bow that could kill something?

Funny, last time I checked you could not shoot fire and lightining from your hands, or slow down time or....I could go on, but you get it.

Last time I checked Fable wasn't reality, but a freaking game.

[darthlime101]

First off, edit you posts so your not double posting. Second off, I agree with Skorms Son. Make up your own story and see if yours is any better.

Third, its a story. Its not real. Its called "artistic lisence". You can put whatever you want in your story. The laws of physics don't matter in a story. Man, some people really know how you wreck your day. Thanks a lot FourmTroll.

[Darkside Hazuki]

Don't get annoyed. That's what he wants. If anything, his stupidity is both amusing and pitiful at the same time.

[darkruler500]

wow great story so far!

[Fable_Fan005]

Originally Posted by Forum-Troll

and still you idiots never answered the bow and arrow comment. you know how hard it is to get to fire a bow to a lethal point? so how is it being not only a kid, but INJURED FROM FALLING ABOUT 15 FEET, how can you fire a bow that could kill something?

if u read the naxt chap u see that he dosent die next time make sure u have all the facts befor u think about being a samrt ***. and in the game when u are a teenager u fire a bow and use a iron sword.

[Fable_Fan005]

This is the third chapter in my book i tryed to exspand the hero into will and some basic knowlege to help him in this room he is locked in. hope u like it

CHAPTER TWO START

WEEK OF PAIN

I wake up in a massive amount of pain. But I don’t care I just lie in the water thinking about the day before. I wonder what has happened to Albion and my family. I stand up still half in the water and make my why to the bookshelf. I start to look through the books and I see a book called the forgotten language. I start to look at the book I se the words “hck nohc” it translates to “Join me”. I wonder why Skorn want me to “join him”? I realize this book is something I might need later. I put the book on the ground and wonder what there might be to eat in this room. I look for hours and find nothing to eat. I looked high and low but found nothing. I am at this point thirsty and start to walk over to the lake. I see something move in the water. I think “fish I never even thought about fish”. I look around me for something to catch it with. I see what looks like a stick in the corner of the room I run over and find out it’s a fishing pole. I cast my line into the water. And within a few minutes I caught a fish. I then wonder what I could use to cook the fish. I run over to the books and grab one. I look at the title “book of spells”. I toss it aside and look for a different book to use. I find “The book of Avo” this made me think my mother instantly. But I don’t have time to think of her now I start to tare pages out of the book. I put them in a pile and look for a why to start the fire. I look around the room for a flint to start a fire but I cant find one. While looking I look through the “book of spells”. I look for the spell “fireball”. I find it and look at the motions to cast the spell. I try them but nothing happens. I try again and I see a spark in my hands. I try one last time this time a very small fireball appears in my hand I toss it onto the pile of paper and hoist the fish above the fire and let it cook…

A few days later I still cant feel my shoulder that much. I practice my fireball skills most of the time. And on occasion shoot a few arrows I made from a few sticks after sharpening the tips of them. I wonder when I am going to get out of this room and what the world will be like when I get out. I yell, “ How mush longer?” I hear a voice say, “Not much longer there are still bandits out here.” Disappointed I sit down and look through some more of the Book Of Spells. It was around this time I started to learn about the difference between good and evil spells and how the effect to why the spell works. I try to use an evils spell know as “drain life” I tried using it on a wasp that flew by me. A green light of energy came flying from my hand and hit the wasp. I could feel the life force of the wasp being put into my body it started to help heal my wounds. It was the beat I had felt in days. But it all came at the cost of an innocent life of a wasp. I was my first taste of what an evil spell can do to another being. I decided not to try it again after the use of the spell I started to felt different I felt like a part of me had changed. It was about a week after the first day I was in the room and I heard the words “It is done, you may go know”………. I was free at last but what the world is like after this last week. The door opened and I see my fathers corps hung from a tree in from of me. I then realized who won this battle and what I must do…………

END CHAPTER THREE

[FableFreak]

They keep on getting better! If you want help with anything just hit me up, I personally am an accomplished writer by school and state standards so I could lend advice and/or ideas if needed. Just helping out another storyteller!

[Fable_Fan005]

Originally Posted by fablefreak1

They keep on getting better! If you want help with anything just hit me up, I personally am an accomplished writer by school and state standards so I could lend advice and/or ideas if needed. Just helping out another storyteller!

thax for the coplement at the time i am just working on this story but i have a idea for a 2ed but it to early to get ahead of myself like that

[Forum-Troll]

Originally Posted by Tsuyu

Funny, last time I checked you could not shoot fire and lightining from your hands, or slow down time or....I could go on, but you get it.

Last time I checked Fable wasn't reality, but a freaking game.

that would require magic training which KIDS DON'T GET UNTIL THEY'VE BEEN IN THE GUILD FOR YEARS OF TRAINING

Originally Posted by darthlime101

First off, edit you posts so your not double posting.

well if it'll keep me from getting banned...

Second off, I agree with Skorms Son. Make up your own story and see if yours is any better.

I will have your story tommorow, ready for viewing...

Third, its a story. Its not real. Its called "artistic lisence". You can put whatever you want in your story. The laws of physics don't matter in a story.

it was more the fact it was just stupid and could of had a lot more effort put into it. if it was truely a good story I would with all honesty pay due credit.

Originally Posted by Fable_Fan005

if u read the naxt chap u see that he dosent die next time make sure u have all the facts befor u think about being a samrt ***. and in the game when u are a teenager u fire a bow and use a iron sword.

Okay well that's something that should belong in the BEGINNING of the f**king story!!

Man, some people really know how you wreck your day. Thanks a lot FourmTroll.

My pleasure....

[Mike398214]

Originally Posted by Forum-Troll

well if it'll keep me from getting banned...

LOL!!

Bit late for that, isn't it?