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Re: Fate
Old 05-31-2007, 12:01 AM   #31
Rhadiel
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ok...i forgot to say somthing...for those who are wondering...if u are....chapter 6 will be up MAYBE next week..so check in!
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Old 06-10-2007, 05:03 PM   #32
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FATE

Chapter 6 : Basic Tests

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Head to bed...you training starts tomorrow...........
The next morning, the world seemed to be very peaceful, as Rhadiel. Buddy, and all the apprentices awoke from there slumber. Rhadiel sat at the edge of his bed, yawning. Buddy was looking up at him, thoughtfully. "What do you want boy?" He asked. "Wanna biscuit?". Buddy's ears lifted to the sound. Buddy had a 'guild biscuit' last night, and had grown fond of them very fast. Rhadiel and Buddy walked down the stairs to the tavern for breakfast. Rhadiel saw a few apprentice girls at the bottom of the stairs. They giggled, then, Rhadiel noticed he was still in his boxers. They motioned to him to go put clothes on, and giggled as they did so. As Rhadiel walked back up stairs, one of the younger girls followed him up. Rhadiel didn't pay attention to her.He blushed as she stood at the doorway, watching him put his clothes on.
What does she want? She walked in to the room and sat on Rhadiels bed. "Hi." she said. "Hey" he replied. She smiled and siad"Ya know...some of the girls down stairs thought you were kinda cute. Not the baby cute either." Rhadiel flushed at this. He was 10 years old. and girls already thought he was CUTE? "Really? I thought you were laughing at me" he said " Whats your name?" She asked. "Rhadiel" "Wow, thats a nice name, never met a Rhadiel before. My names
Theresa" Rhadiel thought Theresa? Wow, what a beautiful name. Rhadiel and Theresa got into conversation. Then, the door opened. The Guildmaster was there. "Why hello Theresa, I see you've met Rhadiel." "Yes sir" she replied blushing. Rhadiel noticed this.I think she LIKES me.....
The Guildmaster spoke to Rhadiel " Lad, if you don't know her name already, this is Theresa, she will be your training partner from now on." To this. Theresa blushed and ran out of the room. "She'll be back....." the Guildmaster said.
"Come now lad, I need to see what your made of." Rhadiel followed the Guildmaster over the river and to what seemed to be a ring, and in the center, a dummy. "Enter the ring lad, and hit that dummy as hard as you can" he told him.Rhadiel entered the ring. Theresa was watching from the sidelines. He hit the dummy w/ his fist, it mad a decent impact for just punching, he hit it seven times or so and the Guildmaster told him to stop."Hmmmm not making the best impact there, are you? Here, take this" The Guildmaster tossed him a stick. "This will do lad, its thick, hard, and strong, so it will be perfect." Rhadiel heard Theresa giggle at her own dirty thoughts.
Rhadiel hit the dummy w/ the stick another 7 times. " Thats enough boy, now tomorrow we'll....*RING RING RING* " Thats the Guild alarm, there must be something lose in the woods. Rhadiel, Theresa, I need you to go and take care of whatever is in there" Rhadiel and Theresa looked at each other then, they both ran w/ there weapons out towards the guild woods.As they entered the woods, Theresa looked up on the hill.There, at the top, were over a dozen beetles. She motioned Rhadiel to follow. They ran up, Theresa hacked at one of the beetles, and it dropped dead. Rhadiel did the same, and in matter of minuets, the beetles were all dead. Then the Guildmaster called them out.
The Guildmaster waited out by the guild woods entrance " That was very good you two. You deserve some pocket money for that." The master handed them each 20 gold peices. They put them in their pockets thoughtfully. "Now...I think you two are ready to prepare for you second stage of training. I hope your ready."
Rhadiel and Theresa worked hard for the years ahead. Their days were full with grueling exercises. The nights with study in the library. They became stronger, and more agile with every passing year. Then finally they were ready to become Guild Apprentices, just as Gloria has foreseen.
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Old 06-10-2007, 06:09 PM   #33
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Very nice! I also like that you have incorporated dialogue from the game! Great job and + rep! I'll have to give you rep later...it seems I've given out too much.

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Old 06-10-2007, 06:12 PM   #34
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thx blu......id give u a cookie....but...i dun have any right now...rep will do tho ^^
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Old 06-10-2007, 09:43 PM   #35
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whens next bit
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Old 06-10-2007, 10:03 PM   #36
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next chapter should be up next week...or this week...well....here it Sunday...it SHOULD be up.....Tuesday or Wednesday
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Old 06-11-2007, 02:03 AM   #37
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o rly kk
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Old 06-11-2007, 03:28 AM   #38
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+ rep its sweeeeet
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Old 06-13-2007, 12:50 AM   #39
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FATE

Chapter 7 : Apprentice Training


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Rhadiel and Theresa worked hard for the years ahead. Their days were full with grueling exercises. The nights with study in the library. They became stronger, and more agile with every passing year. Then finally they were ready to become Guild Apprentices, just as Gloria has foreseen.

A young apprentice girl at the Guild of Heroes named Theresa was leaning up against the doorway to one of the bedrooms in the guild. There, changing, was a 18 year old apprentice boy, he has been in the guild for 8 years. Training for apprentice ship, the years before. He became an apprentice last month. Over the years, grew taller, more muscular, and his hair has changed to black, along w/ a more adult look. This boy is Rhadiel Ragula next to him, his dog Buddy. Rhadiel got fully dressed and walked over to Theresa, " You ready?" she asked. "More than ever" he replied. They raced each other down the stairs, over the bridge and to the melee ring.
Today was the start of their official training as apprentices. As they reached the ring, they leaned on their knees to catch their breath. Standing on the outside edge of the ring, was the Guild Master. "I hope your ready you two, get into the ring, both of you." he commanded. "You two will be sparing together today. and years to come. You will be training w/ real weapons now. So be careful not to kill each other." he told them. Rhadiel grabbed a longsword from the stock of weapons, and Theresa chose a battle staff. "Get ready" she told him. Rhadiel nodded. The Guild Master raised a hand. "Begin!"
Theresa launched herself at Rhadiel, doing a jabbing motion with her staff. Rhadiel broke left, but barley "She's improved" he thought to himself. He timed his strike and swung hard at her thigh. She dodged it, Theresa then struck Rhadiel hard in the shoulder. Rhadiel felt a hot pain go through his arm. He then lunged at Theresa, and in midair, he spun and caught her in her left ankle. She stumbled a bit as blood trickled down to her foot. She then, forgetting her pain, jumped and did a flip in the air, and landed behind Rhadiel. He noticed, and flipped his sword behind his back and blocked. "Impressive" the Guild Master said. Theresa then, using her staff as a pole vault, launched at Rhadiel with her feet. They then both collided in the air and landed on each other. Theresa on top, Rhadiel on bottom. They stared at each other and blushed. Theresa then got off him, and looked away. Rhadiel got up, and looked towards the Guild Master.
"Hmmm very good" he said " very good indeed" Theresa looked at Rhadiel and blushed. Rhadiel had noticed Theresa had liked him the moment they met. He like her a lot too, but never told her yet."Now, you did well. Time to move on the your archery training. Rhadiel and Theresa followed him to the Archery Range. The Guild Master turned to them and said " Each of you take a bow, Theresa, you go first, Rhadiel wait." They bot nodded and grabbed bow and quiver off the rack. Theresa, drew an arrow, and slowly pulled back the string. Rhadiel could see her concentration in her face. Then she let the arrow go.
The arrow flew across the range and hit a dummy almost in the center. She repeated this over and over. Rhadiel noticed she stays very calm. Once her turn was done, she got 100 pts in one minuet. "Your turn" she said to Rhadiel in a flirty voice. Rhadiel walked up and drew a arrow from his quiver "here goes something" he pulled the quiver back and waited to focus on the target. He let go. The arrow flew across the range, just as Theresa did, but Rhadiel's arrow, hit dead center. This happened repeatedly, some he got dead center, and other close. Theresa watched him as he shot arrow after arrow. At the end of his turn, he got 120 pts in a minuet. "Very good lad, keep it up" the Guild Master told him. He walked up to Theresa "How was that?" he asked "Fine, you beat me." she said but the doesn't mean you'll beat me in will" she bragged. "We'll see about that" Rhadiel warned her.
They approached the will center. "Here you will learn about the ways of the will, you will learn the most basic will ability ; lightning." Rhadiel and Theresa looked at each other, then looked back to the Guild Master. "Rhadiel, I have a question, do you feel....light headed?" he asked. "Ummmm.....a little...why?" He replied. "Rhadiel, I need you to focus on your problem, your...light headedness. Focus on that, then wave your hand at the dummy.Go ahead, try it." Rhadiel did as he was told, focused on his light headedness, then waved his hand at the dummy. Then, out of a nowhere, a bolt of lightning struck the dummy. "Good, good" the Guild Master siad. "now, try it again, see how many targets you can hit in 20 seconds." Rhadiel did just that. Cast after cast. The end of his turn, he got 21 targets hit in 20 seconds. The Guild Master congratulated him. "Theresa, your turn. Theresa did as she was told, she hit just as many as Rhadiel had. "Hmmmmm yes yes, very good." the Guild Master said.
"You two have done well, and have learned the three hero disciplines. Mastering the heros skills takes time. I hope your ready"
Over the next year, Rhadiel and Theresa worked hard to master the heros skills. The grew stronger and wiser with every time they trained......
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Old 06-13-2007, 12:52 AM   #40
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Old 06-13-2007, 12:55 AM   #41
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yay^^
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Old 06-13-2007, 01:52 AM   #42
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Nice job and keep it coming! Upping the rep!
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Old 06-13-2007, 01:55 AM   #43
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yay^^ chapter 8 might be up on thursday or friday...June 14 or 15
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Old 06-13-2007, 01:56 AM   #44
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Planning ahead! Always a good thing!
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Old 06-13-2007, 01:58 AM   #45
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yup ^^ i actually have chapter 8 AND 9 done......but i need to check them ovr.....
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