Fate

[Rhadiel]

thx for the comments guys ^^..i did a bit of a rush job on this tho.....its too hot here to work long....

[blu phoenix]

Nice job on the chapter, looking forward to the next. +rep.

[Rhadiel]

thx blue...its not really that good in my opinion....have u seen the new,new cover art for my book yet blu?

[andythegill]

whens next bit coming, ive got a few idea if you like

[Shadow Knight]

NICE but you got a little off track with your speech about "interactive"-ness
Don't let your mind wonder too far or you will never finish it trust me it happens
anyway good job!

[Rhadiel]

Sorry it took so long, I just got this up, I've been so busy with everything, I almost forgot I had a fan fic lol. So, heres chapter 13 for ya.

Fate

Chapter 13 : The Miners Gold


Rhadiel and his faithful dog Buddy, strolled down the old dirt path, making their way to the Great Wood entrance, hoping to complete their second quest, their objective: To recover a large amount of lost gold and objects, inside the Hobbe Cave for an old miner. As they walked through the woods that morning, they could hear the chirping of the birds, and the peacefulness of nature.

The duo continued the stroll through the woods, their feet cracking twigs and crunching leaves as their feet hit the dry earth. Buddy trotted along side his master, and then noticed something up ahead. Buddy immediately ran up to it. Rhadiel wondered what could be wrong, and followed his friend. As they drew closer, he realized it was a dead body, lying there in the middle of the forest road. He looked closer, and noticed that blood on the mans dead body was fresh; he was killed no more than an hour ago. Rhadiel quickly drew his sword, not taking any chances, as the thing that killed the man could still be near by. They walked on, careful not to be caught in any traps that could have been set.

They seemed to have gotten away from the thick of the woods fine, though they narrowly escaped the dozen bandits that walked on by. They then reached Greatwood Lake, and up ahead, they saw a trader being attacked by a couple of bandits. Rhadiel quickly sprinted up to them, and lunged at the traders’ attacker. Buddy leaped onto the other bandit, and bit at his neck savagely. Before they knew it, both attackers were dead. and Rhadiel looted their dead corpses, finding only a few gold pieces, and a rusty old ring. Rhadiel turned to the trader “Are you alright?” he asked the trader. The trader replied with a quick “yes” and he said his thanks and they went separate ways.

They then approached Greatwood Center, formerly known as Great Wood Gorge. There, they sold weapons and several armors and supplies. Rhadiel stocked up on potions and food, and they then quickly ran off to the Greatwood Cullis Gate area….Rhadiel and Buddy walked through the area, it had been inhabited, mostly by trader with tents, and guards for protection.

They passed through the area quickly, and made there way to the Hobbe Cave… As soon as the two walked into the opening, they noticed an old man sitting on a small, rigged bench in front of the caves. The man spotted Rhadiel and slowly limps over to him. “Help me” he begged, “My gold is not the only thing lost in that cave now my daughter is in there too!” Rhadiel then drew his steel long sword, and walked towards the cave entrance. “Please save her Hero, she’s all I got left….” he heard the man plead. Rhadiel turned around and gave the miner a confident nod, then called Buddy to his side. Their quest is about to begin...

The Hobbe Cave was dark, and moist, as Rhadiel and Buddy slowly walked deeper into the lair. They heard the muttering of Hobbes on the other sides of different doors. They walked on, and were spotted by a Hobbe mage, and it called several others to help it out. They all ran at full speed towards Rhadiel and Buddy, and battle commenced. He jabbed his sword through an oncoming but stupid Hobbe, and it instantly dropped dead. Buddy lunged at some other Hobbes and bit and scratched vigorously at the heads of the Hobbes. Minuets later, their attackers were dead.

They both wandered further into the cave, now much more cautious of their inhuman foes. Rhadiel pressed on, his sword drenched in the blood of his now dead enemies. They entered every side room they found, slaying all Hobbes in their path, but they found no gold. They eventually, reached, the focus chamber, were they greeted by what seemed to be a very tiny young lady, with a bluish glow and small wings on her back. “Ah, there you are, that old miner said a hero would come, and here you are.” The tiny being said.

Rhadiel glanced around the room, and saw a pretty, young lady, trapped in some kind of magical dome prison. “Were we set up?” Rhadiel thought to himself.The tiny lady continued. While Rhadiel was in thought. “Now, hero, the sacrifice must proceed.” Rhadiel look to the lady who was trapped, but she looked at him, smirked, and vanished in a wisp of smoke. “Damn!” Rhadiel yelled aloud. But, before he could react, Buddy and him were trapped themselves...”*******s... ” Rhadiel muttered...