Jack the child

Nrod · 08-03-2007, 06:55 PM

the sun was setting on the day as jack ran back to his mothers open arms in rose cottage he loved his mother so much and never wanted to leave her but alas this summer he would be staying with his father again with all the hate and fighting in his fathers house it was a wonder that jack lived to be 9 years old. His father was a strange man bent on death and destruction. He loved to watch people be tortured and killed brutally and often would kill people in front of jacks own eyes but jack dare not tell his mother about what happened because then his father would stop paying him to visit and he said kill jacks mother. By the time jack was 15 he was a rich man and bought the nicest whit rodes and mask that money could buy and wore them around proudly like a rich noblehe was so set apon pretending to be a noble he forgot to visit his father one summer and in vengance his father went to rose cottage and kill jacks mother jack in rage ran to grey house were his father was living and killed his father his stepmother and all his step brothers and sisters he left no one alive in grey house then he went to barrow fields and kill all the trraders and gards that were there then he turned on oakvale and killed everyone that was older than 15 because he wanted the younger ones to live in fear of him because now with his robes blood red with the blood of his victims and his mask filled with the hate of the souls he was no longer little jack son of jack the fearsom he was now Jack Of Blades

animandan · 08-03-2007, 06:58 PM

cool story...
but you need to work on punctuation, spelling, among other things...

Nrod · 08-03-2007, 06:59 PM

i know i was just drafting

should i write it up into a full story and expand or trash it?

PSYCHOPAT · 08-03-2007, 06:59 PM

nice one.

im not sure he bought the mask tho, the legond of the mask of j.o.b. goes back to the old kingdom

Nrod · 08-03-2007, 07:00 PM

yea its flaw in my story i can change it so that it was his fathers mask thought

animandan · 08-03-2007, 07:02 PM

or maybe he found it?

PSYCHOPAT · 08-03-2007, 07:03 PM

i can't picture j.o.b. as a baby.
lol, coming out the womb with his mask and sword of eons. lol

no, but that was good man.

Nrod · 08-03-2007, 07:04 PM

hmm maybe i think it would be more a family herlome thought just because of his soul being embodied in it but since when the hero puts the mask on he turns evil maybe its not jack thats evil but the mask that is possesing him and making him evil...

animandan · 08-03-2007, 07:06 PM

i thought the mask itself of Jack o' blades....

lol o'

Nrod · 08-03-2007, 07:08 PM

lol yea maybe but i think the mask is just an embodiment of evil and jack of blades is just another person possesed by it and it made him live longer'

PSYCHOPAT · 08-03-2007, 07:08 PM

next time u play fable read the book j.o.b. (in the game) it'll explain everything. .........but his childhood.

Nrod · 08-03-2007, 07:09 PM

i know ive read it but i think thats just some b s some editor made up to make you feel like you know about j o b

andythegill · 08-03-2007, 08:30 PM

man i love your sig lol right in the nads you deserve rep for the sig

FableFreak · 08-03-2007, 09:11 PM

But isn't Jack a horrible demonic figure who was around long before men came to power in albion. And even then Jacvk was old? This really ain't playing in to how he was described in the game...

andythegill · 08-03-2007, 09:21 PM

and how could he buy the mask, i think jack of blades is that mask that was stuck on a humans face which made him immortal