Its the long awaited sequel to The Archon,Arken and Me.
I have wanted to put pics of what I think the main characters look like and I will do so now
http://www.politicalreign.com/site/w..._knight_01.JPG
The Hero
http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/fa...ostroimage.jpg
Nostro
http://fc08.deviantart.com/fs38/f/20...ireWarlock.jpg
Black(Couldn't think of a first name so I used her surname)
Chapter 1
I crept through the house, looking for any danger. I was so close to my objective and I wasn't going to be stopped. I made my way through the corridor and stopped. I drew my sword and cut a wire that was placed before my feet. They weren't going to get me that easily. I moved forward, still alert and aware of my surroundings. I then tripped over a second wire that was behind the first wire. I fell to the floor and the sound echoed around the house as my armour crashed into the ground. Then several figure lept onto me and pinned me down. The leader came over to me, smiled and said,"I knew we would catch you uncle!" I sighed as the children poked me and sat on me. Then the maid entered the house and said,"The cake is ready outside". The children slid off me and ran outside.
I picked myself up and made my way to the heroes guild. It was currently under construction, but Nostro was already teaching children that excelled in either strength, skill or will. My "Niece",Black was one of them, but had skipped classes to go to a friends birthday party. I tried to catch her and take her to the guild, but she had got the better of me and there was no convincing her now. At this rate there was no way she would take over as Archon when she was 18. Nostro saw me and came over to me."Its good to see you", he said, grinning."Hows it going with black". My dissappointed face couldn't be seen through my helmet and so I said,"Not very well. She seems to want to spend more time with her friends then in class. I don't know maybe we are asking too much of her. What do you think nostro?"
He didn't have time to answer that, because we heard screams coming over from the nearby village. It was one of the archons brothers. And he had come with force. I drew my sword and headed towards the village.
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Plz post what you think about this. For some reason obody is posting what they think in the fan fic forum anymore and I really want to here your opinion.
