[ALtesha]

Misha thought back to the years of training in the Guild.
She could still remember the day she came to the guild, her face wet from the tears she cried.Her younger sister didn't say anything but cried too.
Misha and her sister were the only survivors from a raid in their town. They could get away thanks to a Hero who showed up...Too late.
He brought them to the Guild with the promise that he would keep an eye on them.
And so their training started. Misha and her sister were extremely talented, in their own way.Spells were no problem for Misha and Kate was a master of the bow.
The hero kept his promise and visited them every week.He often gave them presents too and was a very kind man. He tought Misha spells and helped Kate become a master with her bow.
The day of their graduation came near, and Misha became very nervous. She practised every day with her magic and learned almost all spells.
Kate was more relaxed and treated her bow every day.
She was sure that her sister and herself would graduate.

Misha had never been as happy as on the day of the graduation.
When she got her Guild seal, she made a silence promise to herself.
"One day, I'll find the one who killed my parents.And I'll kill him without any mercy."

this was the first chapter!!
Hope you liked it, don't mind spelling...

[ALtesha]

CHAPTER TWO

It was nice breathing the fresh air outside of the guild. Misha enjoyed the sounds of birds and animals. But soon the silent sounds turned into screaming and crying.
A man came running over the road.

"Kate!! Bandits!! where's mommy? They're coming kate!!"
kate pushed Misha into the bushes.Bandits passed them and runned towards the village. Misha cried on kate's shoulder.

"Help! Help!"

It was awful. Everyone that Misha knowed was slaughtered and killed. The air was filled with screaming and the smell of burning flesh and houses. When the bandits' bloodlust was gone, Misha ran to their old house. "Mommy..."

"Help!! Hero, help! The Picnic Area is attacked by wasps!!"
Misha ran to the picnic area. There were wasps everywhere. But there was one bigger than all, mightier. Misha unseathed her sword and started attacking the wasps.then she used all of her spells to kill the big wasp in the centre.
Every wasp was dead, and so were the people who couldn't get away.
Misha saw a women and a man lying in a puddle of bloud.

"Mommy!" Misha had screamed.
But her mother wasn't living anymore. She was brutally slaughtered, just like the rest of them. "Come on, Misha.Let's go to the hill.", Kate said.
On the hill there stood a Hero. There were dead corpses all around him.Bandits.
"Hey, you two! Are you allright?"

"Miss, are you allright?"
Misha awaked from her daydream."Oh...o, yes, I'm fine, thanks."
She quickly ran away. This place gave her too many memories.

[ALtesha]

CHAPTER THREE

Misha set up a camp in Greatwood.She didn't really like towns.
It was a little bit annoying to go shopping when everyone knows your name. Maybe she should by her stuff in the guild.
"Hey, that reminds me, maybe I should check out the Guild for another Quest..."

" I'm Thomas. I'm from the Heroes Guild.You must have heard of it."
o yes we did. Mommy used to tell us stories before we went to sleep. "The Heroes Guild is the place where lads turn into brave and wise warriors, who can even tame the will of the gods Avo and Skorm." We have always listened to the stories. One Day Misha asked her mother: "Are there any girls too in the Guild?" "Yes there are. Don't you know Briar Rose? Or Scarlet Robe, the Balverineslayer?" and that evening, she told us all about Scarlet Robe, the women who smiled at Balverines.
"If there is anyone you can trust on, it's a Good Hero from the Guild..."
So we told Thomas that we knew about it. He promised us that we could live in the Guild and even become Apprentices, if we trained enough.
Well, he kept his promise...

[ALtesha]

CHAPTER FOUR

The next day, Misha went to the Guild.
There were some interesting Quests on the map table.
"No, I don't think I'll take these..." Misha said to herself. She was wondering what Kate would do right now. Probably cleaning her bow.
Misha remembered what she wanted to do and ran to the Guildmaster.
"Guildmaster, is Sir Thomas here? There is something I would like to ask."
"Yes, he is in the Guild Woods, I think. Why don't you go looking for him?"

Misha found Thomas under a big oak tree. He was reading a book and he didn't notice Misha.
"Thomas? It's me, Misha. I would like to ask you somethiing."
Thomas looked up and smiled."Misha, sit down. What do you want to ask?"
"Well..." Misha hesitated. "I would like to know who killed my parents. I want to find them."
Thomas closed his book.
"Misha, are you sure you want to find those murderers?"
Misha looked him in the eyes and he knew she was ready.
"okay, I'll tell you. You know, long ago, there still was a Kingdom. There wasn't really peace in the Kingdom: there wasn't any confidence between the swordsmen and the wizards. A big war came and the Kingdom lost his glory, and fear came.
There were some Swordsmen who had sworn to Skorm that they would kill every Magician, no matter how small or weak they could be.
The started with their "war" long ago, and it still continues. You're a magician too.
And a pretty strong one too. The warriors feel magic and destroy everything near it.
You were a powerful source and the went looking for you. And they found your village, but not you. You're safe now. You know how to defend yourself, but beware of the Warriors of Skorm!!"
"So everyone was killed because ME??" she screamed. "No,no. Not only because you. There were other Magicians in your village, maybe as strong as you."
"Who?"
"Your father and mother."

"What are you doing, mom?"
Misha's mom tried to hide the sparks that flew over her fingertips."Nothing, dear."
but Misha wasn't planning to give up. "But mommy..."
"No, Misha. It's allright. I'll learn you when you're older. Not now. Don't tell anyone about it..."

[ALtesha]

CHAPTER FIVE

Misha had never realised what her mother was doing. She didn't know it as a child, and she forgot it when she came into the Guild. So that's why everyone was killed, by a stupid war against Magicians!!
She started to cry and Thomas tried to comfort her, but she was still down.
But she wasn't planning to be sad for long. "I'm going to find those warriors and show them that they should be scared of Magicians!" She said, and she walked out of the Guild Woods.

First, she wanted to do some research about the Warriors of Skorm. She read that they were brutal warriors who slaughtered every Magician on their path, without any exception. She also read that the Chapel of Skorm lied in Darkwood. She drawed a map of the area. She would find the *******s who killed her family.

"Daddy, where are you going?"
"I'm going on a trip with Raymond, Misha. I'll be back soon."
"I'm going to miss you, daddy."
Misha hugged her father. She didn't know that this would be the last time she saw him.

Misha wondered where her father could be.
Thomas always said that he was dead too, but he left the village before the raid.
Maybe he would still be alive!

[FableFreak]

I'm just throwing this out there, but this sounds a lot like the plot in Fable and literally there are like three or four other threads about fan fiction I think they are called,

1. "A hero's Journey"
2. "A Fable Story told by me"
3. "Fable Fan fiction"

Yours is better than the last two, but almost as good as the first one.

[Dark Drakan]

I think thats quite a good fan fiction so far, keep up the good work ALtesha

Always like reading the fan fiction people post...

[ALtesha]

thanks everyone!

[ALtesha]

CHAPTER SIX

Altesha wasn't planning to just run into the Chapel of Skorm, kill some people and run away. She would first try to gain some information, she could find that information in Oakvale, a small town that was also destroyed by a raid, long ago.
And because she wasn't in a hurry, she took the Trader Escort Quest card.
She teleported to Darkwood. What an awful place!
The smell of balverines was in the air, and she didn't like it at all. Two traders ran to her. Their faces were white from fear as they told Misha about the Balverines, hobbes and Bandits...

"There is one thing you should always fear, Misha."
"What, mommy?"
"If you ever see a bandit wearing a red plate armour with black trousers, run away as fast as you can.Understood?"
"But why mommy?"
"Just because... I'll tell you later."

Misha sighed. There was a lot her mother promised her to tell.

[ALtesha]

HEY!! Wait a second!! a hero's journey is written by you, fable freak!!
( i know i'm slow)
You Ego-*******! oh, i can appreciate it after all...

[ALtesha]

hey i made a doll of Misha:
(thanks to Wayuki's place for the base!)

[ALtesha]

What do you think?

[ALtesha]

CHAPTER SEVEN

"Hero! Please help! We heard awful noises around us and we think that there are Balverines!"
Misha nodded and grabbed her sword. Hero Time.

"You need to concentrate, Misha!" Thomas said. "I'm trying!" she sneerd. It just didn't work. "FEEL your spell! Feel it!" Misha closed her eyes. She was practising this Divine Fury for a week and she couldn't even appeal to the gods. But suddenly she became calm.Like she had always did the spell, she just concentrated and finally got the fury of the gods. She almost hit Thomas with her powerful spell. "Whoa! Now THAT was good!" Misha smiled.

She started walking down the road. After a while she saw some Bandits. "If that's all..." she mumbled. She grabbed her bow and aimed. Thanks to her double arrow spell, the bandit was dead before he hit the ground. The other one's head fell off.
Misha was aiming at the third person when he hit the ground without being hit by Misha's arrow. She looked at the arrow in the bandit's body. Blue Feathers!

"Kate, isn't it boring to always have the same colour of feathers on your arrows?"
"no, it means that I'm sure that I want this. And i like blue."

These were Kate's arrows! She looked behind her and saw a girl with a light-blue outfit. Kate!

[ALtesha]

CHAPTER EIGHT

It really was Kate! Her sister! Kate smiled at Misha. "Hey, big sister" she said and she ran to Misha. "What are you doing here?" Misha answered.Kate hugged Misha and said: "Helping you ofcourse! It's a hard quest, you know." Misha was very happy to see Kate.

After the bandits, there were also Balverines who would like some traders for dinner.
After killing a Balverine, another trader ran to them. "help! something bit me and left me for dead. Can i please come with you?" Misha said it was ok, but Kate didn't like it that much.
After a long journey, they almost arrived at Darkwood Camp where they could rest. "Come on! We are almost there!" "Uh, I'm not feeling so good..." The trader who was bitten shaked all over his body. He slowly transformed into... "A Balverine!" Misha screamed and started a Divine Fury spell. Kate used her Double Arrow spell and rapidly shot arrows at the Balverine. Misha tried to keep her concentration and she calmed down a bit. Here Divine Fury hit te Balverine. After all those arrows and the spell, it died. Misha was tired. Kate asked Misha to heal the traders. Misha was better in those spells than Kate. Misha healed the traders and Kate and they moved to Darkwood Camp. Rest, at last...

When everyone had a rest and was ready to go, they moved on. After killing the whole lot of Balverines, they finally came to Darkwood Weir, where you could go to Barrow Fields, their final destination. Misha was walking to the tunnel when a Earth Troll showed up. Misha was surprised by the troll and ran back to her sister.
"Kate! It's... A giant troll! can you do something with your bow?"
Kate tried a few times, but the troll laughed at the arrows. Then Misha tried fire ball and lightning, but nothing worked. "I'm going nearby!" Misha used Slow Time and ran to the troll. There she started to hit the troll time after time, until she finally could defeat it. But she was so tired. Her eyes closed and everything turned black. "It's allright, Misha.It's..."

"But I'm not sick mommy!"
"Yes you are! You're as warm as it is outside!" Misha always got sick in June. "But it's just a litlle bit fever. It's not worse." But Misha really felt bad. Everything got black, and she slowly fainted.

[ALtesha]

TARA! another doll, this one's kate. I tried to do my best, but i can only work with paint so It's not really good.