My english project

[droded]

He did not appreciate it I guess... I took 15 minutes of my life to check through an essay about monsters and it isn't even used...

[Tsuyu]

Damn, that is such a nice subject to write about - I wish my english teacher would give me that task. Lucy in Elfen Lied is the perfect subject to show that monsters aren't born, they are made, and now that I think about it I could write an awsome report on it this very moment...

[droded]

Yeah I know what you mean Tsuyu. This is extremely easy...

[Hexadecimal]

Originally Posted by droded

He did not appreciate it I guess... I took 15 minutes of my life to check through an essay about monsters and it isn't even used...

well... he did ask you not to...

Originally Posted by blue crow

Here is a work in progress note i have spell check but not grammer check so please do not correct anything. All i want you to do is read and tell me what needs more work on.

you shouldn't look at helping people as a chore that "takes 15 minutes of your life"... if that's the way that you feel, then you're probably helping for the wrong reasons...

[§ephiroxa§]

Originally Posted by droded

He did not appreciate it I guess... I took 15 minutes of my life to check through an essay about monsters and it isn't even used...

Originally Posted by blue crow

Thanks i will work on it soon and just to let you know i am 14. Any way like i said i dont have grammer check but i do have spelling check. My teacher checked it out and she wrote how to fix me errors and what needs more explaining. So i am either goona use your words or hers.

This was a post RIGHT after your post... And the fact that you took 15 minutes out of your life to help someone should make you feel good, No matter if they took your help or not.

Originally Posted by Hexadecimal

you shouldn't look at helping people as a chore that "takes 15 minutes of your life"... if that's the way that you feel, then you're probably helping for the wrong reasons...

What hex said.

[Tsuyu]

Originally Posted by droded

Yeah I know what you mean Tsuyu. This is extremely easy...

No. Not really. It's just that Elfen Lied is based on the very concept this report is about, so writing about the anime would make for an interesting task, to me. I love Elfen Leid and how it very much shows how the humans fear that which is different, and by miss-treating that which is different they created the monster - had they accepted it, it would not have turned on them.

Never said it was easy...

[blue crow]

Oh by the way the new verison i made has more mistakes i will fix them and as soon as i am done i will post it again. By the way you guys are telling me that my spelling and grammer isnt right but what to know is how is it as a story?

Edit- Droded its not all about you i hate when i ask for help and someone helps me and my teacher helps me as well and i use her advice and the other person gets mad cause i didnt use there words or spelling. I said in the begining dont correct my spelling i should have added just tell how is my story and such.

[droded]

I have learned a lesson: Never help. (Much like Tsuyu's favourite quote).

[blue crow]

I learned one too dont ask for help if the person you ask is a attention seeking whore.

[§ephiroxa§]

Woah...lets cool down people. lets not turn this into a big thing

[blue crow]

I am not i am just stateing the obvious. I mean come one just beacuse i didnt use your words dosent mean anything yet you take it personally.