[Marcopolo]

why thank you

you have no idea how long that took me, also i have revised it a few times already and came up with a new idea to try a few days ago. i might chuck out a crudeish beta sometime soon, just tie up some loose ends and cut off access to the completely unfinished part of the town .

okay now a shout out to all the story writers out there, i have a base idea for a story for this town but i am no writer so i thought i should post the story and see if anyone could make a good iteration of it that doesnt sound so empty like mine

story structure : i've decided on a new name and the framework of a new story

the new name is ashenvale, it is oakvale's twin city. the story will be somewhere along the lines of: there were two brother architects that built the major cities of albion, they were always competing to be the best so one day they agreed on a competition, they were to build two twin cities in their own styles, one brother had built bowerstone and the other had stuck more to the smaller villages and was therefore not well known. the older of the two brothers who had designed bowerstone built the town ashenvale and the younger brother built oakvale...

so yeah, it kinda sucks but the idea is there if anyone can expand on it a bit

[Orpheus Lupus]

Hmm...I could think about it, if you don't mind a little silliness >_<"

Anywho. Awesome job, there. Hmm...Wouldn't this mess up the Chamber of Fate sequences or is it somehow in a different area of the Chamber? (Not that I'd mind a change of scenery) Sorry if it's already been asked :-P

[Marcopolo]

nope it works just fine, remember all the original stuff is floating in space about 3000 feet above the level, cant even see it if you look up

[Marcopolo]

aaw c'mon no story writers here either

[Dark Drakan]

Originally Posted by Marcopolo

aaw c'mon no story writers here either

Im sure there is but they might not have seen your request in that message.

[Marcopolo]

any place you suggest placing it otherwise?

like that barrow fields sub-forum

[Dark Drakan]

Originally Posted by Marcopolo

any place you suggest placing it otherwise?

like that barrow fields sub-forum

Yeah you could ask in either of these places, its up to you:

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[Marcopolo]

thanks

[Marcopolo]

just thought i'd chuck out some pics of the rebuilt bowerstone for fable harsh that i am making


i'll get more of the new town soon!

[Kave]

nice!!

[§ephiroxa§]

sweet

[veXec15]

Amazingly Awesome!!!
Idea: A museum
-It could have Paintings of Cool enemies like jack of blades
-Statues of heroes
-Legendary Weapons on Display
-And the thing that every museum has... a gift shop

[§ephiroxa§]

Originally Posted by veXec15

Amazingly Awesome!!!
Idea: A museum
-It could have Paintings of Cool enemies like jack of blades
-Statues of heroes
-Legendary Weapons on Display
-And the thing that every museum has... a gift shop

That is a GREAT idea man.

[Marcopolo]

Originally Posted by veXec15

Amazingly Awesome!!!
Idea: A museum
-It could have Paintings of Cool enemies like jack of blades
-Statues of heroes
-Legendary Weapons on Display
-And the thing that every museum has... a gift shop

good one, i'll add that to the list with the other two good ideas people have suggested

[Darg]

I can't believe I haven't discovered this until now, Marcopolo! It's absolutely amazing! I have loads of suggestions and ideas, but what if you could make a particular area of town paying homage to Darkwood (i.e. dark trees, swampy terrain, etc.) With a few buildings in the midst of the shadows... It could be a place where bandits reside, sort of like the darker district of town, a place to go for those who're tired of the light side of Albion. Perhaps there could be a dealer of all dark clothes and obsidian weapons here, as well as a variety of dark mercenaries for hire... Just an idea. Keep working on it and I can't wait to see the end product!