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Originally Posted by Marcopolo
...okay now a shout out to all the story writers out there, i have a base idea for a story for this town but i am no writer so i thought i should post the story and see if anyone could make a good iteration of it that doesnt sound so empty like mine
story structure : i've decided on a new name and the framework of a new story
the new name is ashenvale, it is oakvale's twin city. the story will be somewhere along the lines of: there were two brother architects that built the major cities of albion, they were always competing to be the best so one day they agreed on a competition, they were to build two twin cities in their own styles, one brother had built bowerstone and the other had stuck more to the smaller villages and was therefore not well known. the older of the two brothers who had designed bowerstone built the town ashenvale and the younger brother built oakvale...
so yeah, it kinda sucks but the idea is there if anyone can expand on it a bit 
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I write a bit... using your base idea; I would adapt the mythology of Romulus and Remus...I could send/pm you a quick outline, the actual story would be maybe three -five pages/screens...Sound good or No?