Poems v.2

[blu phoenix]

No you inspire
all of the fire
to come out in me
so that i can always be free
arc your poetry is the light
that ignites the dark and eery night.
but my poems are not very great
they suck and this line doesn't rhyme
unlike yours my poems are nothing
your poems are much more and this poem it seems rhymes no more...

sucked didn't it???*sigh* oh well...tried...listen like i said i am not a poet.

[Arckon]

It twas good,
but it'd be better if you had confidence.
Let your words flow onto the page
Trust me this is litericy not rocket science
Poems can build powerful expretions that get stronger with age.
But what would
happen if i told you that i started ryhmeing this year
at one point There would be an empty page no words just a tear.

[blu phoenix]

Originally Posted by Arckon

It twas good,
but it'd be better if you had confidence.
Let your words flow onto the page
Trust me this is litericy not rocket science
Poems can build powerful expretions that get stronger with age.
But what would
happen if i told you that i started ryhmeing this year
at one point There would be an empty page no words just a tear.

you see even when you aren't writing poetry you are good with your words...i don't know what it is...

[Arckon]

All t takes is a heart of gold.
You have one. Trust me.
You just have to know what words mean.
thats all u need. for poetry

[blu phoenix]

Originally Posted by Arckon

All t takes is a heart of gold.
You have one. Trust me.
You just have to know what words mean.
thats all u need. for poetry

yeah guess so. heart of gold eh? you sure?

[Arckon]

yes blue u have a heart of gold
if not siver or blue.
It is an expression for being very bold.
And yes wut i say is true.
No matter wut poetry resides in your heart.
No matter if it is tart

[blu phoenix]

Originally Posted by Arckon

yes blue u have a heart of gold
if not siver or blue.
It is an expression for being very bold.
And yes wut i say is true.
No matter wut poetry resides in your heart.
No matter if it is tart

see great words again...what's your secret really?hehe! thx for heart of gold thing and bold thing...

[Arckon]

it may not be a secret but the words a a muture wise teen

[blu phoenix]

Originally Posted by Arckon

it may not be a secret but the words a a muture wise teen

yes, i can definatley see that!!

[Arckon]

This my prayer of poetry
all who read, remember it.

Let it be written,
and so it shall be.
A prayer to the Lord,
Will set ones heart free.
You just need to learn,
If it is a poem you urn,
That every one has good ryhme.
It just takes a little bit of time

[blu phoenix]

yep..awesome...wait i am speechless............... ..................

[Arckon]

No one can be certain, without a clear head,
especialy if sun has faded and moon is dead.

[blu phoenix]

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one word: wow

[Arckon]

what is WOW

[blu phoenix]

um wow about your words, your poems, your rhyming...wow about you and well just wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!......... .............