In a small place named alboin their layed a small boy dreaming of greatness of one day beomeing a hero. Some times he drept her was a powerful archer or a noble night. Other times he drept he was a evil wizard or evil knight. But in all his dreams that layed before him he could never imange the destiny that layed before him. One beautiful moring in a small town named oakvale a boy named fable had dozed of into his little fantasy world. His father had woken him up to tell him that he needs to buy his sister theresa a present. But in astonishment his father relized that fable hasn't got his sister a present yet. So his father told him that he's not going to give him the money to buy his sister a present. So his father told him that he is going to have to go around and preform good deeds and he would give him a gold peice for each good deed he does. So the first he met this little girl and she had lost her teddy bear, and she asked him to help her find it an so he agreed. While he was looking her heard a scream from the top of a hill and there was a bully picking on a small child and so fable without action went and hit the bully so hard he broke his nose. After about 1 hour he had ran into a man that need his stuff to be watched so he agreed but here came along the bully with his friends and so they had tryed and hurt fable but we all know that the hero doesn't die. So fable kicked all their ***. So the farmer came back and fable told him what had happened. He was very grateful and gave fable a small prize in a bag and said that not to open it until he is 18 and able to weild a sword. So he hid it oakvale where noone could find for 10 years. Ok back to the story. As fable was walking home to get the gold he has earned he ran into the little girl and gave her the bear. When he was done he heard some nosies comeing from the back ally and it was to manger of the sword shop and the manger of the items shop he ran and told the mangers wife and she had ran up there and she was holerin and cursein like crazy. She was happy to tell fable about the good deed he had preformed so she did.when he got back to his house his father gave him the gold he promised. He had ran down and bought the chocalates from the trader and took the choclates to his sister. She had a bad feeling and told fable to stop and hide and then all of a sudden a man ran in to oak vale from barrowfield and was shot with and arrow out came bandits. She told him to hide she ran home to to tell there mom and dad.
Ummmmm, the story had potential, but there were many grammatical errors, and the story didn't flow. Also never say "Ok back to the story." No offense but I am pretty sure you are not a writer
In a small place named alboin their layed a small boy dreaming of greatness of one day beomeing a hero. Some times he drept her was a powerful archer or a noble night. Other times he drept he was a evil wizard or evil knight. But in all his dreams that layed before him he could never imange the destiny that layed before him. One beautiful moring in a small town named oakvale a boy named fable had dozed of into his little fantasy world. His father had woken him up to tell him that he needs to buy his sister theresa a present. But in astonishment his father relized that fable hasn't got his sister a present yet. So his father told him that he's not going to give him the money to buy his sister a present. So his father told him that he is going to have to go around and preform good deeds and he would give him a gold peice for each good deed he does. So the first he met this little girl and she had lost her teddy bear, and she asked him to help her find it an so he agreed. While he was looking her heard a scream from the top of a hill and there was a bully picking on a small child and so fable without action went and hit the bully so hard he broke his nose. After about 1 hour he had ran into a man that need his stuff to be watched so he agreed but here came along the bully with his friends and so they had tryed and hurt fable but we all know that the hero doesn't die. So fable kicked all their ***. So the farmer came back and fable told him what had happened. He was very grateful and gave fable a small prize in a bag and said that not to open it until he is 18 and able to weild a sword. So he hid it oakvale where noone could find for 10 years. Ok back to the story. As fable was walking home to get the gold he has earned he ran into the little girl and gave her the bear. When he was done he heard some nosies comeing from the back ally and it was to manger of the sword shop and the manger of the items shop he ran and told the mangers wife and she had ran up there and she was holerin and cursein like crazy. She was happy to tell fable about the good deed he had preformed so she did.when he got back to his house his father gave him the gold he promised. He had ran down and bought the chocalates from the trader and took the choclates to his sister. She had a bad feeling and told fable to stop and hide and then all of a sudden a man ran in to oak vale from barrowfield and was shot with and arrow out came bandits. She told him to hide she ran home to to tell there mom and dad. 
