Rhadiel's/Darg's Story Circle

[Rhadiel]

hmmmm? a story of the 360? o can do that...ill think it up

Peter and the 360
A Chancelorville Tale


Young 14 year old Pete just gotten a xbox 360 for his birthday....It was a splendid machine....white, sleek, shiny...it was great.
One day, he went to play his new game, Gears of War on his 360.
He inserted the disc, but it slid right back out.
For some reason, the 360 was rejecting the game. Pete wonder what it could be.
Peter got angry and threw the disc an yelled at the 360, as if it were alive.
As he yelled, he cursed, and swore he'd destroy it and go buy a damn ps3.
Suddenly, the 360s normal green light turned red. Pete backed up....then, out of nowhere, a disc shot out of the 360, and another,and another....they were aimed at Peter...he got hit several times, and called for help...but no one was there to answer his call.
Soon the room was full of random games, Pirates 3, Halo 2, Fable......they were no stop. Finally Peter got up, and ran at the 360. He was furious, he kicked at the 360, knocking it on its side.
Some how...the 360 got back up......Peter...he was...scared, and then....he ran.
Disc were everywhere. They were even wedged into the walls.
Then....Peter was cornered...some how the 360.....walked.....It faced Peter...and all he can think of was his life.....

Later on...his parents got home.....they looked around for Peter but couldn't find him...They looked in the game room.....there...on the floor...lied Peter....scared up..and bloody...He was dead...he had discs embedded into him......Next to him......the 360...its light green....plugged into the wall an still running....and Gears of War was paused on the TV screen.....

[blu phoenix]

Good story, but sad...+rep.

[Rhadiel]

yes i know...sad indeed.....imma make a happy one next time ...not really....
gimmie another topic lol

[LionHeadTex]

How about...a story about...me?

You are the master storyteller, am I right

[Rhadiel]

Wanted : LionHeadTex ,Dead or Dead....Part 1 sorta.....
A Jason Howells Tale

In the state of Philadelphia, many cheese stake owners have been robbed of their beloved cheese steaks.
The police have already found a few suspects....
A little girl, a astronaut, and....A f*ckin' ninja!
The police have suspected the ninja most for well...hes a ninja.....
As the suspects were lined up, the ninja had threw a small bomb at the wall, and had escaped.....

Damn.....h/o...my moms here....i need to get off my computer...Ill leave you this until i get back on.....cheerio ^^

[blue crow]

Umm a story about love?

[Rhadiel]

Wanted : LionHeadTex ,Dead or Dead
A Jason Howells Tale

In the state of Philadelphia, many cheese stake owners have been robbed of their beloved cheese steaks.
The police have already found a few suspects....
A little girl, a astronaut, and....A f*ckin' ninja!
The police have suspected the ninja most for well...hes a ninja.....
As the suspects were lined up, the ninja had threw a small bomb at the wall, and had escaped.....
The police had taken a record of the ninja....he was 18......and he has a history in criminal background......plus...th ey checked his grades...they were good....but he had no common sense...
The ninja : LionHeadTex, was jumping buildings.
AS he jumped...he stole from every house......dogs, cats,.....CHEESE STEAKS!!!!!
LionHead was a vicious criminal ninja, with mad skillz
One day...he decided to steal every last penny from a federal bank.
That night, he broke into the bank through the roof. It was glass.....he thought, WHO IN THEIR RIGHT MIND WOULD MAKE A GLASS CEILING FOR A BANK????
That didn't matter now though.
He was inside......he walked up to the safe.......he pressed his against the door, as he turned the lock to hear the clicks....within a few seconds...the door was open. LionHead walked into the room. Inside....was a **** LOAD of money, bags and bags of it.
Swiftly and silently, he took bag by bag, and hauled them up on the roof.
When he was about to get the last bag up, a security guard was standing there, gun drawn...and badge flashed.
Then....LionHead abandoned the loot and fled......
He only took 2 bags of money.....
:nin ja:

[LionHeadTex]

Bravo! Rep

[Darg]

Hey Rhadiel, would you mind if I joined you? I never truly thought of this before. The artists get requests for their arts, but I never thought of the story-writers getting requests for tales! Good idea, but could I perhaps take requests too? Just wondering and it's okay if you don't want me infringing on your own thread, but I have loads of free time. Really.

[Rhadiel]

Originally Posted by Darg

Hey Rhadiel, would you mind if I joined you? I never truly thought of this before. The artists get requests for their arts, but I never thought of the story-writers getting requests for tales! Good idea, but could I perhaps take requests too? Just wondering and it's okay if you don't want me infringing on your own thread, but I have loads of free time. Really.

hmmmm......well.....if im not here....and som1 makes a request..it could be trouble....soooo sure ^^ ill request andy if ican, to change they thread title
and we can rep each pther on a job well done ^^ yay!!!! partner:nin ja:
(BUT REMEMBER.....DONT! HOG THE THREAD )

[blue crow]

Umm can one of guys make a story about love?

[Rhadiel]

ummm well...sice Darg joined i think HE should type it up this time ^^....better be good Darg lol

[Darg]

Love? Er... not my strong point, but let's see what I can come up with...

Short Story #1: "A Part of Life..."

There was no light shining through the window of the one room apartment building that he had called home for so long, and though it was the middle of the day, it seemed more like midnight. Darkest midnight. After so many long years of waiting in agony, it had finally happened just last night. He got the call about nine that his father was found dead. It was the worst possible news that could have ever happened. He was young, about to be wed to the most beautiful woman he had ever known and yet there had to be death entering his life like a cold knife deep down in the center of his heart. That day had had plenty of trials, all of them getting worse, though at the end of the long, angst-filled day, he was in his love's arms again, the only one who could truly understand his predicament and love him through it all, the only one who knew what it was like. And though there was death, something that couldn't be put out of his mind, a thought still overshadowed it all: love. Through it all, the horrible things he would yet have to endure and the many things he already had endured, he was comforted. There was still hope, something that he could see every time he looked into her deep eyes and knew every time they were together. Somehow, he knew in his heart he could make it. After all, as his father had always taught him, death is a part of life. And also that love is as well...

Well, I tried.

[blue crow]

+ rep good story.

[Darg]

Really? Love's a really touchy subject in stories. Well, for me anyway, though I hoped I handled it... decent enough. Any criticism for me, Rhadiel?