[Pirate X]

When I was walking, a package suddenly lay at me feet.
Curious, I picked it up, hoping for a Gift.
When I opened the wrapper, I found only one thing.
And that was the Grim Reaper.

Yes I know it's short and sort of sucks, but I was bored and I made it in a minute

[Shirosaki]

It's imaginative but it doesn't rhyme or have subtlety. By the name of the thread I thought you meant this.

[White Knight]

Originally Posted by Gunman23

When I was walking, a package suddenly lay at me feet.
Curious, I picked it up, hoping for a Gift.
When I opened the wrapper, I found only one thing.
And that was the Grim Reaper.

Yes I know it's short and sort of sucks, but I was bored and I made it in a minute

Sort of? I see no reason for a poem of finding the Angel of Death in a package to exist.

[Firis]

^There are several reasons, to Gunman: You've got your storyline, now you just gotta make it rhyme lol. I like hearing abnormal poetry.

[Pirate X]

It's one of those poems that don't rhyme XD