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Tale of the Wasps
Old 06-28-2008, 03:45 AM   #1
rewasandcookie
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Tale of the Wasps

ok well seeing how Black Dahlia (i think) is doing most if not all the characters i might as well do about the creatures / monsters and if you want me to stop Black Dahllia you can tell me and i will. Ok so first up is the tale of wasps

Long before the Old Kingdom came around
An insect so small that it did not make a sound
Flew around the forest so bright
It gave out its very own light

This one insect was always hungry it was
It did not eat a single thing all becuase
This one insect did not know what to eat
Discovering what satisfied it was no easy feat

Stinging everything from plants to the ground
Discovering nothing it flew to a village it found
There it soon hit a very big man
He was very strong and had a nice tan

It's stinger went inside of him
It found what it was looking for but he looked a bit dim
He fell to the ground dieing right there
But the insect had had it's own share

Soon howerver this insect needed some more
It went into the village and killed another four
Soon it's body was not big enough to hold it all
The very heavy insect started to fall

It prayed to any god that was still out there
Along came Skorm who heard it's prayer
He gave it a bigger body one too big
Everyone could see it as big as a pig

After running off to a far away land
It stopped to have it's offspring in the sand
It however died the very next day
Leaving another two hundred to stay

These also looked for mortals to feast on
However a hero emerged on someone's lawn
He went to battle in the woods
Having help from two warriors with hoods

They were winning the battle until a mistake
He and his helpers fell near the lake
All he could do was cast a spell
Imprisoning them all in the depths of hell

However they were still growing down there
Waiting to be released to make things fair...


Ok i dont rly expect anything good this was my first poem so.. and i couldn't find any sub for the word in the 2nd to last thing srry

Last edited by rewasandcookie; 06-28-2008 at 06:47 AM.
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Old 06-28-2008, 05:54 AM   #2
SorenSwift
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Wow man really impressive. + rep!
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Old 06-28-2008, 06:48 AM   #3
rewasandcookie
teh n00B
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I have another about nymphs
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Old 06-28-2008, 09:11 PM   #4
Zquad
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Wow, nice
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Old 07-17-2008, 05:58 PM   #5
Dentie
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It is good,, it really is
all the things you write are good
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Old 07-17-2008, 07:52 PM   #6
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It was really good well done
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Old 07-20-2008, 11:44 AM   #7
Zquad
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I have to say it again. Love this one. Clearely one of my favorite rhymes.
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