Vero's Grand Hall Of Poetry.

Vero Caerso · 06-16-2009

I just made this thread so people could post poetry if they wanted to, and also so that i could post my poetry rather than posting them in someone else's thread.

Screams of Pain.
You screamed as you slept,
You screamed as you walked,
You screamed everywhere you went because your pain is everlasting,
You cannot stop your pain because it was already took its tole,
You just wish you could turn back to the day this all began.

Thats just one at the moment, i'll be posting more later.

All comments are welcome

Another Spartan · 06-17-2009

Thought I'd take a go, so
Vengeance.

The feeling of vengeance, is so sweet.
It's really amazing, can't be beat.
Of course when you take it, you do not fret,
Until that wondrous feeling, turns to regret.

Feel free to criticize greatly, as that was the first poem I've ever created.

Vero Caerso · 06-18-2009

Your mask has been taken from you,
Your mask has revealed your true self,
Your true form has been showen to the people that you hid from all these years,
you cannot pretend to be the person you want to be.

Another Spartan · 06-18-2009

Is this JOB or a poser?

I bite your hand,
it tastes grand.
I'm not a cannibal...
I sure hope so...
Eat your feet,
their a treat.
Please don't come here.
You don't want to.

Phantom · 06-18-2009

Does everyone on these forums have Poetic Skills?
I'm a loner

Vero Caerso · 06-18-2009

Wow spartan person that was so lame..
No offence but it was pure ****...

And what the hell? I have more poetry skills than you danton.

Xeon · 06-18-2009

I lived in pain I died in vain
for I am evermore a.... sparrow

for the sparrow that is I..... I hate poetry

Another Spartan · 06-19-2009

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vero Caerso

Wow spartan person that was so lame..
No offence but it was pure ****...

And what the hell? I have more poetry skills than you danton.

The point was for it to be stupid.

Vero Caerso · 06-19-2009

Well you achieved it >__>

I just hate people when they rhyme >_< I dont know what i just dont like rhyming poems.

Hexen_Harlot · 06-19-2009

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vero Caerso

Wow spartan person that was so lame..
No offence but it was pure ****...

And what the hell? I have more poetry skills than you danton.

Yours... wasn't that much better. Sorry, I really can't think of a nice way to say that.

Phantom · 06-20-2009

Quote:

Originally Posted by Phantom

Does everyone on these forums have Poetic Skills?
I'm a loner

What I meant there, Vero, Is that I'm a loner because I can't write poetry, and It seems that a lot of people on these forums can.

Hexen_Harlot · 06-21-2009

I can only write good poetry in German lol

Vero Caerso · 11-09-2009

AHAHA your so funny, not.

Go to a german site and do poetry maybe people will care.

Oh news people i have improved my skills amoungst the ones that i have done By the way "frat boy" who looks like a girl, those weren't even well thought poetry, just a 5 second thing.

Cobalt Gamer · 11-09-2009

Poetry you say?

Empty sky
I lay staring up at an empty sky,
No stars, no moon, why oh why?
Where have they gone away?
I waited so eagerly during the day,
To look up at the stars all alone.
Thinking of you and the love I've shown.
The memories of our past,
they stay with me they''ll always last.
I turn to face an empty site,
All alone now, I shake with fright.
Your not in my life all the stars go away.
I long for you each pressing day.

You kept me going so many times before,
now I can't even make it out the door.
We talk all the time, with a smile on my face.
But you go to someone else for a warm embrace,
the hand which I once held
with another person, your hands do meld.

I lay alone staring at the empty sky,
The stars are gone alone I cry.
I stare into the sky and see your face,
I wish you would take me away from this place.
Back with you laying in my arms.
Your voice, my soul it calms.
Then the stars returned at once,
and the moon returned no more a dunce,
you lay beside me happy as could be.
I'm no longer alone, now I finally see.

AMADOINITRITE????

Oh and for the record vero, don't go making fun of members, we're a nice little community here, but that doesn't mean we don't bite. Your poetry is on the level of a four year old, whether it was done in 5 seconds or not.

Psychosis · 11-10-2009

Vero, don't you think you're being a little bit rude? You said yourself that you made this thread for people to post some poetry. As soon as a couple of people write a few lines, you snap at them and start biting their heads off. I hope I don't insult you with what I'm about to say, but your poem wasn't exactly impressive.