[Firis]

Well with poetry eating my insides trying to claw out:
I feel I gotta shout
I feel I gotta pout

I gotta secret, it's on the tip of my tongue and on the back of my lungs.
And I just cannot keep it, tell it scream it weep for it!
Living dead and alone no path to be shown.
I will squeal and scream 'till humanity squirms in wretched pain tearing you insane.
I said it before and I'll say it again, "If you think your alive then your better off dead!"
**** stains on the carpet from wear your mouth defecated your dirty words and lies
**** built up to my thighs, covered and smothered lovign and shoving in a sick cliche. (I think that is how you spell it, as in a social group "cliche" or is it "click")

Sorry... Was lsitening to Metalcore XD

[Vero Caerso]

Time goes by with the words you say..
I get lost in your eyes as you look at me,
I wish i could have you but i dont want to try,
The last time i was with you i could have died,
Storms in the winter.. Showers in the snow..
could you come save me from this i dont know?

[DarkenedSoul]

*Looks at thread*

Woah woah woah Vero, cool down. Different poetry means different things to different people, and just because it doesn't reach out to you doesn't make it lame. You shouldn't be so full of yourself, give people a chance.

These are the lyrics for a song I'm writing for my new album coming out next year called Rebirth. The song is called Storm.

Oh pathways of mist and monuments of old
Show me the secrets you've been condemned to hold
I die below the stripped, dead trees
And wait for this winter and this world to freeze...

Salvation will never come
The stars will shine no more
The storm is here...

Clouds of black, and world of white
Bereavest me of all things light
Soul of fire, and body of frost
Glance upon what we have all lost

Winds of rage, a blackened void
Look upon what you've destroyed!
Storm of ice, this world will die
Your rage has scarred the shattered sky


I look around and see no light
The world is dead, cold and white
The winds are dead on this shattered earth
Now we wait for humanities rebirth...

[Psychosis]

That is brilliant DS, very chilling. Here's a quick song / poem that I put together last night whilst listening to Tarja Turunen's new un-released single on her upcoming album. I decided to name it 'The Sacrifice'.

You lift the curse
On the dark side of me
Under that spell
Lies a fate true and free

Your ending sorrow
My burning pain

This night of evil
Begins once again

Run while you can
The time is drawing near
My bleeding heart
Shall fill you all with fear

Once a good friend
To a world I knew well
A restless demon
In me begins to dwell

I've opened up now
No turning back

Dare to defy me
My heart fades to black

A part of me
Remains under this shell
Reach out your hand
Release me from this hell

Sacrifice made
One that is not in vain
My human form
Becomes your dreaded bane

Now I will be
Your burden forevermore
You saved my life
For that I'll be your whore

[Firis]

In the glistening sun
Shining off your cheeks
Staring at that smile
Minutes feel like weeks


Tongues reach from the ground
Licking my eyes
Blinding them with lust
A feeling most profound

You take my hand
I lean in for a kiss
You return and we enter bliss
Autumn leaves fall on us
A warm orange worthy of love

Life so prosporous... All for us...

[Vero Caerso]

In this time of the dead,
In this world of suffering..
I begin to wonder what the world means to me..
What the people around me are starting to be,
Could you help me realise the truth?
Or will you let me wander the world looking for the truth?


By the way i just wanted to make a point that poetry isnt all rhyming and what not.
I mean i might rhyme by accident, considering i dont like it that much. My poems come from my heart, people often wonder how i do it. And the answer to that question is that ive been through so much.

[Firis]

Originally Posted by Vero Caerso

By the way i just wanted to make a point that poetry isnt all rhyming and what not.
I mean i might rhyme by accident, considering i dont like it that much. My poems come from my heart, people often wonder how i do it. And the answer to that question is that ive been through so much.

Tell ya the truth I don't exactly know how to write non ryhming poetry yet, I don't know all the rules and what not. :/

[Vero Caerso]

Lol firis there isnt any rules for them, well not that i know of anyway.
I tend to just write ones that are like... Have something to do with my life and what i feel strongly about.

Im just saying that poetry isnt just rhyming, only reason i say this cause everyone in my year done a rhyming poem at school and i was pretty much the only one who didnt.